User blog comment:KitCalling/Second Chances - Why?/@comment-31129923-20181103092331

That ending though!

The entire time I was reading this, I was also constantly trying to guess what the protagonist was so horrorfied of? First, I thought it had something to do with an accident at the football game itself or some illicit activity at the after-party but after those were ruled out, I just started to visit all kinds of theories. None of which came close to the real outcome.

When I wasn't thinking on that, I savored the portions taking place during the party as it brought a familiar, juvenile delinquent atmosphere to mind. However, I came to catch on as the story began to weave the two parts together and ended up blindsiding me with an unexpected conclusion! While hinted at, it was surely subtle about it.