User blog comment:SodaCat/Muse - Chapter 10: Snowfall/@comment-2099017-20151112165948

Good chapter.

TBH, I'm not really good with criticism and I don't really have anything to say that no one has said so far. The only thing I have to say so far is that I feel sorry for Jesse, but Mandy does have a point. She can't really dump Ted yet just because Jesse confessed his love for her.