Thread:Cdc1998/@comment-5385060-20151201140238/@comment-5385060-20151202062855

No probs. Honestly, I enjoy reading other people's earlier work. Even if they believe it is awful, because it shows where they started, and how well they have developed.

I might not review every single chapter, but I am going to take time out each day to read a chapter until I catch up. I'm just happy my reviews helped. I can't help it. If I see parts of other people's stories that might need a little advice to help the writer improve, I just have to speak up. Not everyone appreciates it, but hey, that is life. I just enjoy helping people improve by sharing advice, and my tips and tricks to structure stories, etc.

With your story, I will be paying a close eye on development of characters. From what I've read so far, you have the plot completely covered, and does well in terms of pacing. I'm not saying you're not as strong with character development, I just noticed that some writers on her do struggle with that a little bit.

Oh, you like 'Tis The Season? I always thought that was the weakest arc. Behind The Mask is made of a few arcs, as he climbs the clique ladder. The strongest arc, I feel is the current one with the greasers.