Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-5385060-20151103081052/@comment-2173402-20151103213717

Well, for starters, I would just like to say I adore the way you've written them in so far. You've done a really good job of creating them and making them feel connected within each other, it really works.

That said, I agree with Michael. I think what would help is sitting down with each character (well, not literally, but you get what I mean) and really getting to know them. Focus on building each character 100% before moving on to the next one. I mean, maybe you already know all of their details, so in that case I'd suggest writing one shots about each one of them individually.

Like how you've done with Josh; you know everything about Josh. I bet if I asked you, you could name his favorite number, food, and color right on the spot. For the Art Freaks, I think they're a bit orientated on each other in the clique, rather than their individuality.

I don't know if this makes sense, lol. If not, I can clarify. I know I tend to be wordy :p