User blog comment:MichaelDiaz101/Broken/@comment-26358727-20151108202943/@comment-26358727-20151109020544

Well, that worked wonders for you! What you said is true - writing needs to carry a certain level of real emotional baggage to make it really come alive. If you're feeling what you're writing, and really feeling it, then you're sure to come up with something convincing. And you've done just that!

Hopefully, however, you've managed to get out some of that frustration by now!

Really? Well, I guess we all have our experiences. I was often keeping to myself during high school, as well. I tried not to keep many "close" friends, but I talked to a lot of different people from a lot of different social circles. It was a pretty good place to be in, looking back, haha! However, I did keep a couple of close friends during those years that I still keep in touch with today - God knows why they've kept me around so long.

I have to ask: is Greg going to open up a little bit over the course of the story with the people in his clique? I know Liza gets him, but at the moment it seems like he's an outcast even among his own people... and that's kind of lonely. ) :  Will he eventually branch out, and seek a more personal friendship with them, or will he stay relatively isolated?