User blog comment:TheToughGuy/The Next Year At Bullworth For C-Money: Chp. 23/@comment-4369319-20120626193944/@comment-3145713-20120627221609

BBF: That's the problem, you're giving the "crap story" thing too much thought. Don't take advice as pressure. That's not what it's for. It's strictly to help you. If you're grateful for the help, it shouldn't bother you at all. Now please, make up your mind: Do you want crits or advice on improving your story, or not?