Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-4369319-20170703033255

Hoookay, so again, money where my mouth is. I'm happy for folks to come and take  a look at my greaser girl: Dez Russo <-- click for her profile, it's a Google Doc.

A gist of her character: She's in a greaser gang of girls led by Lola (because why not), and though she's plain and not super conventionally attractive (her faceclaim ), she has dreams of becoming a famous rock star one day. She does anything and everything to aim for this dream, but between keeping up her grades, helping her family and having a pretty active social life, Dez holds onto that dream like a lifeline.

I'm not looking for critique on anything in particular. I would appreciate it if people just let me know their thoughts, what they like/dislike, what could be improved, etc. All that good stuff that comes with crit.

Thanks and happy writing! 