User blog comment:MichaelDiaz101/Flowers for a Girl/@comment-26358727-20171227133324/@comment-26358727-20171227194807

Oh, I love it! I think you're right, though, about popular television. There's way too much scripted high school on our TV screens - and no one talks like that in high school. I've always appreciated the candid nature of your writing, and that you do capture that teenage angst with sincerity. I kind of missed out on that part of my life: I was so busy being ten that I woke up one day and I was twenty, already out of high school and starting college. Culture shock and a half, that was, but it also makes trying to get in the groove of a high school student challenging for me.

You've just gone ahead and summarized your own improvement - and it definitely shows from the reader's perspective. In no time at all, it will be second nature! After all, practice makes perfect! ( :