Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-4833053-20151119031731/@comment-4833053-20151120023002

I really like that idea. Thank you for the help, Michael.

As for what you brought up with the Preps, I'm actually really happy you brought that up. That's something I was hoping to include in a chapter focused around Edgar. Initially, they really don't pay mind to it, but then, as you mentioned, they would probably osracize him for spending so much time with Charles, Michael, Jimmy and Bradi. Knowing Edgar, he would probably call them out for how they treat others if pushed to the limit. and in the end, it may come down to a physical response.

Also, just as a reference point, could you possibly point out where I went analytical on Edgar? I don't want to end up screwing up his character, and hopefully I won't, so as a reference point could point out some key moments when I was analyitical, if you don't mind? I apologize, it's just I have a tendency to overlook and forget about things.

Do you think I should include that idea I mentioned at all? And do you think I should go with my idea for chapter 10 and finish that so it wouldn't screw up the continuity, and perhaps make the chapter centered around Edgar chapter 11?

Again, thank you for the help.