Talk:Brooklyn Kallicko/@comment-174.140.167.212-20110720234750

Alright, I'll try not to... be mean. At least keep the other character in character.

But why are his eyes two different colors?

1. Tad Spencer would never stand up for anyone. The only reason he would do it is to spite Derby. You may want to rethink that friendship reason.

2. Brooklyn being a prep... why? Because he wears Aquaberry? That's not really enough. To be a prep you have to be accepted by Derby and be rich. Tad is rich, but he's close to being kicked out because he wants to spite Derby, to overthrow him. Same with Parker, Parker is going poor and once Derby finds out, he's out.

3. Whyyy is he friends with Johnny Vincent? The prep hating greaseball?

4. Okay, Derby. Derby would hate him. Derby has no friends, besides Bif. His clique members are not his friends, they're his clique members and nothing more. Pushing and knocking over? No, that is not Derby's style. Derby would outright tell him he didn't like him and make his life hell, the other preps would treat Brooklyn horribly. Derby would NEVER dirty his hands by doing foolish games, such as knocking and pushing. That's not his style, at all.

All I'm commenting about. Not nit picking your character, just telling you to keep the other characters IN character.

- Zak