User blog comment:SodaCat/Muse Chapter 5: Happy Birthday to You!/@comment-26358727-20150709010453

Wow, the second part of this really struck me with the same emotional intensity as the attack scene in The Outsiders (especially if you've seen the movie!). I'm an absolute sucker for this sort of instability in characters because, unlike Gary, Jesse isn't needlessly antagonistic. He acted on behalf of protecting someone, but the moments directly after losing control of yourself are a very scary thing.

This is a very strong development from Jesse, but one that I'm very excited to see pan out. I certainly wasn't expecting it, but I'm glad you wrote it the way you did here - it was sudden, intense, and highly engaging.

You certainly have a way of leaving us wanting more! ( :