User blog comment:Cdc1998/A New Face at Bullworth: Part 5/@comment-2173402-20150717181713

Man, I really like the way Edgar humanizes Charlie. Through his insight, you can really tell that Charlie isn't just a random asswipe, he's got his reasons even if they're not always the best. Not gonna lie, this reminded me a ton of Gatsby & Nick's relationship, it's a really interesting parallel xD

You're doing real nice! My only suggestion is something that I struggle with, too, and that's describing scenery c'x I wish I could offer tips on that but, like I said, I suck at it too.

Otherwise, really nice chapter! I can't wait for the next part:)