User blog comment:MichaelDiaz101/Michael's Misadventures: Diaz and Hopkins Part 2/@comment-4369319-20120521032311/@comment-4369319-20120521040749

Calm. Down. Dude.

I know it's a work of fiction. I'm saying that even though it's a work of fiction, professor and myself still felt insulted. That ain't good.

Sure, if you want to write a woman punching asshole that's fine. You want to write a sympathetic person? Fine as well. You're free to write whatever you want. But the way you worded it sounded a whole lot like it's okay to hit chicks just 'cause they said bad things. You probably didn't MEAN to, it comes off that way. IDK, I would've just changed the wording around maybe. Something along the lines of "He personally wouldn't have done what C-Money did, but the boy always had a bad temper, and tried his best to be there for his friend."