User blog comment:Cdc1998/A New Face at Bullworth: Part 5/@comment-4833053-20150715095310

So, I'd like to say a few things about this chapter: 1)Sorry it's long, I had a lot of ideas flowing through me for the turning point. 2)Sorry if it's dull. I've been writing this for the past few hours on lack of sleep. Yay for erratic sleep schedules :D! 4 (To Michael if he reads this chapter, since it involves some of his OCs) Sorry, but I felt Jimmy, Bradi, and Michael were good characters to involve in the turning point. If you would want me to portray them differently, I can go back and change them. 3)I'd love some feedback on this and would like to know where I could improve, what were some of the good areas, etc.