User blog comment:SodaCat/Bullworth Nights: Chapter 6/@comment-26358727-20150624123346

I really like the direction you've taken in this.

Johnny's anger with her is spot-on - we know from his interactions concerning Lola that he's very quick to anger, so it's not a big stretch to think that he'd be livid over a friend leaving all of a sudden (especially one he considered to be a close friend). It also adds a lot of conflict; you'll have to introduce some serious reconstruction of their relationship in order to make it fly, but that's where the fun comes in, haha! (

It's a very original spin to what you're trying to tackle here, and for that, I must congratulate you. Really awesome tone in the language use, as well. Can't wait for more!