User blog comment:SodaCat/Six Seconds Flat/@comment-26358727-20151003221635

Adding in an unnamed appearance from your other characters was a really cool idea; the way you've done it here allows the reader to know the timeline is the same as Jesse, Alexis and Piper while remaining subtle and smooth. It didn't disrupt the flow of the story, but kind of made you go, "Hey, is that—?"

Don't get me wrong, though - I really like these characters, too!

As a twin, it's interesting to read about the portrayal of twin characters. Things like finishing each other's sentences and things may seem cliche at a glance, but it does happen sometimes. That, or one says something that the other was going to say, as well. I can't wait to see more about them, and the other Punks, because they seem like they're going to be a really fun clique! ( :