User blog comment:SodaCat/Welcome to the Family/@comment-4833053-20151125040359

First off, to me, this didn't get lame at all. It was really captivating and interesting. The way in which you introduced how all of the Punks formed struck me as if it were a scene in a movie, and I could picture someone narrating over it for the parts where you switched from one character to the next. While I loved how you introduced all the characters meeting Jason, my personal favorites were West, Tripp & Gage, and Jackelin. Those just struck a chord with me, especially the part in which West explained to Jason why he allowed himself to accept the beatings. I also love the way in which you have Jason end off the conversation slightly different, although giving the same overall meaning of the statement, for each of the characters.

Excellent work, Soda! I really liked this piece. I may not always comment on your work, but I always read it in my free time and overall I really enjoy it. I do that for a lot of the users here, but it's due to the fact that I'm terrible at remembering to comment and give feedback, as I'll do it mentally, but not actually type it :p Sorry, it's a bad habit of mine. When I get the time, I should go back and comment on some of the other user's work (I've been meaning to do it for Michael's recent short pieces revolving around his protagonists Greg and Andy, as those have been really captivating for me)

Also, as you and Michael both suggested, I did a chapter of my story revolving around Edgar, and fleshing him out. I was wondering could I possibly get your opinion on it whenever you get the chance?

Again, excellent work, Soda.