Thread:Cdc1998/@comment-5385060-20151201140238/@comment-4833053-20151202220448

I appreciate you keeping an eye on the character development. As you mentioned with other writers on here somewhat struggling with it, I can be the same way. Sometimes I end up writing myself into a brick wall and don't know how to continue, which is what occurred for chapter 8 and I didn't finish it for a while until Michael helped me with some ideas, or I end up giving more attention to the other characters rather than my protagonist. That has occurred with Edgar, and now I'm going to try to properly balance the focus of characters.

We're all bound to have our weak spots in our stories. I know I sure have mine in ANFAB. Nonetheless, 'Tis The Season was very well written. After I'm done working on something on here, I'll begin reading your Greaser Arc.