User blog comment:PrettyRaveGirl/A little practice from Mikhaila Miloslavskaya/@comment-2109247-20120215182851/@comment-4675595-20120216195611

Another thing to keep in mind, for future reference: Always keep in mind what you're trying to accomplish with your story, and each chapter. Even if it's something simple like "show a certain aspect of a character's personality," make sure to have some kind of goal in mind. Otherwise, you'll end up babbling on about nothing for a few paragraphs. It's happened to me more times than I can count XD