User blog comment:WayfinderOwl/Notes for my story/@comment-4059927-20150910195253

I do like Joshua Hyde as a character a lot. Though, thus far, it seems as if the plot very narrowly mirrors the events of the game. Just with a different character at the helm as opposed to Jimmy.

I also like that you have a very brief summary of how you wish your story to go. In writing there are many various events that may occur which could divert your attention to a differing plot. So be mindful of that too. It looks excellent for what is given so far!