User blog comment:SodaCat/Okay so/@comment-26358727-20150622203720/@comment-26358727-20150622220331

With a little bit of planning and a little bit of practice, you'll have Alexis up to Jesse's standards in no time. Now that you've got an approach to her that you're feeling, you should have a much easier time getting into her mind and exploring the real depth of her character!

I'm in complete agreement about avoiding the typical Johnny Vincent/OC cliches; go for something totally original that breaks that mold. You've got the foundation to do it! ( :

Aha, when you're looking for feedback on direction, I think the proofreading's allowed to be placed on the back burner. (