User blog comment:TheToughGuy/The Next Year At Bullworth For C-Money: Chp. 7/@comment-1824274-20120224211516

Hey, good chapter. There are some spelling errors, you just need to fix those. I thought it was funny when C-Money hit the ball in Ted's eye XD But his eye would be swollen or even worse. He could have gone blind. How bout the injury was worse and he needed surgury. That happened Alfredo Aceves when he threw a fastball at "I forget his frikin name"s eye in 2010. I think he played for Chicago... Anyway, can't wait for the next one. How was that for a critisim? Not that bad, right? Hope it helps, man.