Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-4369319-20170703033255/@comment-5385060-20170703044030

Dez seems like a very well fleshed out character, with a good balance of tragic and good points. I do have one thought that could be improved on, or maybe explained a little. This part here;

Personality -
 * Pros: Artistic, fun-loving, sweet, caring, musical, creative, street-smart.
 * Cons: Brash, pushy, loud, stubborn, aggressive.

(I underlined the part I'm not sure over.) It seems a little contradictory that she can be sweet and caring, but be quick to kick the ass of anyone who rubs her up the wrong way. Is there a reason for that? Does she prefer for everyone to think she is caring and sweet so they will underestimate her? The rest of the profile goes with the fact that she's brash, loud, and rough around the edges. Other than that, Dez seems like a cool character. Someone I'd be interested in RPing with one day, or reading about her in a story.