User blog comment:Kingofawosmeness777/Malcolm's Life at Bullworth Academy part 10/@comment-5283064-20101124174723/@comment-1895212-20101124190326

Hey, Kingofawsome77 It's a great story, I love reading it (maybe we could combine stories?) but here's something: Evertime a character talks you don't have to write like this: Then Pinky said: "Something" That doesn't mean you don't have to write like that, in most books people write like this: "Something," said Pinky. In my opinion it makes it feel betterr. I love the story though keep up the good work.