User blog comment:Dark Seeker Kotsu/Throw me to the Wolves: Chapter One/@comment-2218058-20110703033351

Great story. I seem to notice you like to introduce your characters in groups. It's fine, just I usually make my character alone at first then make friends along the way instead of starting out with a group of friends when he arrives. It makes for a lot more work. But still it's a good story.