Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-5385060-20170623050546

I have done quite a bit of a revamp of Antonia. To be honest, her old version was a lunatic. Flat. Unrelateable. Only served to be Milo's lunatic ex. I'm the first to admit it.

I've tried to develop her more into a proper character in her own right, and do something different with her than I have done with any of my other characters.

I am looking for concrit. Just tell me straight what's lacking, and what needs to be worked on, etc. Heck, even tell me how you interpret her character. That helps to, to make sure she is coming across how I intended. 