User blog comment:TheToughGuy/Chronicles Of TheToughGuy: My Time On Bully Fanon Wiki/@comment-2173402-20151222185346

Similar to Lucky's message, kinda, don't feel bad you didn't take PP & Memai's criticisms.

TBH I looked over their advice and stuff and they didn't present it well at all. I mean, I'm not gonna go ahead and say I'm the best, but I think it's fair to say I'm a pretty experienced writer at this point. As someone who's reviewed people's stories and done actual in depth critiques, their ways of critiquing weren't really all that good.

They sounded really pompous and kinda "we're better than you" (well, mostly Memai tbh) about everything, from the minute they got here. And the whole "everyone's patting each others backs" thing was totally pretentious and just downright asshole-y; let's face it, this place isn't exactly "IMPROVE YOUR WRITING HERE AT BFW". It's kinda more sharing writing with people with the same interest.

Regardless of that, I still think people on here improve a lot--yourself included. Contrary to what people like PP&Memai think, you don't need to have critiques to improve. You can improve your writing by yourself, which I think is possibly the best way of improving your writing. With critiques, you're writing to please others. With self-improvement, you're writing because you yourself are maturing.