Thread:WayfinderOwl/@comment-4995321-20151225171936/@comment-5385060-20151227020039

Having guys trip all over for almost no reason is a little mary sueish. Not major, but I'd avoid it.

Sticking to Sophia. Well, that isn't really her own flaw is it? If people keep being nasty to her and ripping up her drawings, then that is just Sophia being portrayed as a victim. Not the best thing to go for. Stick to Sophia drawing something, but convinced it is awful. Adding a low self esteem element.