Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-5385060-20170623050546/@comment-5385060-20170623163023

I'm glad she comes across that way. I did like how there was that shadow villain with Gary, but thought it was executed poorly. With her I wanted to explore another way of control and taking over, rather than just beating kids up and spewing nasty insults to get it. But not flat out exclude it, because people don't change over night. Just because she has a new hairdo and a new outfit, that doesn't suddenly erase who she used to be. She could with the right trigger flip the hell out, latch onto another person and turn into a crazy stalker lunatic all over again. She has major issues that a few therapy sessions aren't just going to fix. Knowing that shows really is helpful, so I can further expand on that.

To answer your Townie question, they never really liked her to begin with. It was just a case of "well, she fills in our joining requirements, so we got to let her in." But since that doesn't come across in her info, I'll make that even more clearer. Go into greater detail to really show it.

Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.