User blog comment:MichaelDiaz101/Michael's a Junior: Part 11/@comment-208.102.73.81-20130311024945

Great chapter man, I liked it. Michael's sarcastic remarks & jokes are always funny.

Hey I have an idea for my next chapter. A new student named Patrick Davidson who has a reputation for being a bigger psycho than Charles comes to Bullworth from continuation. He hates to be touched, and whoever touches him he hurts. He broke a guy's neck, pulled a knife on his coach, and beat up a few teachers. When he arrives Charles gets assigned to do a report on him by Mr. Galloway. Charles leaves to go smoke in the bathroom(this takes place around the time Greg is getting dirt on Michael, C-Money, and Charles) the guy walks in. Charles tries to be nice and introduce himself but the guy is being a dick. Charles then gets an attitude and makes the mistake of touching him on the arm.

He then grabs Charles and throws him into the bathroom mirror and challenges him to a fight at Three O'Clock in the parking lot( not in the hole because everybody on campus finds out and if it was in the hole a) everbody wouldn't be able to watch, and b) Crabblesnitch & Johnson would find the location). He tells him if he runs, tells anyone, or tries to get out he'll only hurt him worse. Charles then goes back to class and tells Michael & Greg(who for some reason is in there) what happened. Michael says he would fight Patrick but Charles tells him not to, because Patrick is tougher than Michael, Charles, Greg, C-Money, and Hopkins combined(he doesn't take steroids its all natural).

After the bell rings Greg runs out and then meets up with Charles & Michael in the hall. He has a switchblade and wants Charles to plant it in Patrick's locker. They do but Michael spots Patrick walking back to get his leather jacket. Charles tries to get it back out but enters the wrong combination. They then run off and go to an assembly in the gymnasium. Halfway during the assembly Patrick walks in and gives Charles a death stare, so Charles runs out and decides to leave in his car. When he gets there he tries to start his car but it won't work. He then notices the switchblade lodged in his steering wheel with a note through it. Charles reads it and then goes and looks under the hood, but finds that his cables have been cut.

He then tries to leave but a prefect drives up and asks where he's going but Charles tries to make excuses to get him to leave, and tries to run by hopping over a wall, but the prefect tazes him and takes him to Johnson. He gives Johnson the switchblade and Charles is threatened with suspension because he was carring a concealed weapon, and then after he berates Charles he  lets him go. After he gets out he meets back up with Michael, C-Money, and Greg. He tells them what happened and tells them that he doesn't know what to do. C-Money suggests that he get somebody to fight them, and Charles says he'll get Casey(he's the only strong jock that doesn't totally hate Charles. So Charles pulls the fire alarm and everybody reports to the football field. Charles meets up with Casey and asks him for help, and Casey says he'll help him for $450.

Charles then robs the student store for the money(which Greg reports to Assistant Principal Johnson) and gives the money to Casey. Him, Michael, and Charles then go to the libary and find Patrick. Casey tells him that he won't be doing anything to Charles and mkaes the mistake of touching Patrick. Patrick then breaks Casey's hand and punches him so hard he goes into the book cases and knocks most of them down. Casey then takes $100 as a charge for what he went through but gives Charles the rest of the money. All the guys(charles, michael, greg, & c-money) meet back up and C-Money sggests to avoid the fight he try and get detention. Charles tries to get detention in Ms. Phillip's class but it doesn't turn out well and he doesn't get detention.

As a last resort he goes to Patrick and says that he'll pay him the money to not fight, which Patrick accepts but calls Charles "the biggest pussy he ever met". Charles, after reaching a breaking point with Buddy walks up to him, confronts him, tells him, to give back the money, and says that the fight is on, which actually starts in about 10 minutes. Buddy then says he's going to destroy Charles in the fight. At 3:00 PM everybody heads out to see the fight. The students have lined up cars into an octogon as a ring and as soon as Charles & Patrick are about to fight a prefect, Mr. Galloway, and Assistant Principal Johnson try to stop it(even though it hasn't even started), but all make the mistake of touching Patrick, who knocks them out. They then star fighting and it's obvious Patrick has the upper hand.

And as all the chaos has gone on there have been bets about how long charles will last in the fight. Everybody except Michael, Nicole, Bradi, C-Money, Greg, Casey, Jimmy Hopkins, and Vance(who has organized the bets) bet that Charles won't even last 3 minutes. After pummeling Charles for a few minutes(and now the fight is on minute 7, so everbody is pissed)Buddy pulls out his Brass knuckles to finish it, but Greg jumps on him and starts punching him, but Buddy has dropped his brass knuckles, which Nicole notices. Charles has only gotten 3 hits on Patrick and is dazed sitting by a car, so Nicole goes over and puts the brass Knuckles on Charles' right hand, and tells him "Cripple the dick". Charles and Buddy then circle each other and wait to see who will make the first move.

Greg yells "Kill him Charles!", Nicole yells "Break his face!", Michael yells "Rip his head off!", and Mr. Galloway says "Don't fuck this up Caldwell!". Patrick then swings at Charles, who actually dodges the hit, and wiht all his force, cocks his hand back all the way and punches Patrick in the face. Patrick stands there for a few seconds, and then falls down, knocked out. Everbody except the preps & jocks start cheering for Charles, which suprises Charles & all his friends. The next day with all the bet money Charles replaces the student store money and now has the respect of most of the cliques, but obviously it won't last for long.

How does that sound? Do you think its good? Want me to change anything. Also if you've seen the film Three O'Clock High you'll understand the chapter. Also if you wanna know how patrick looks he looks like buddy revell from three o'clock high