Thread:Cdc1998/@comment-4059927-20160610100540/@comment-4833053-20160616204447

Hey dude, sorry for the late reply. I had some errands to take care of. Anyways, like you suggested I did attempt an outline (at 2:00 AM because I couldn't sleep) and I would like to get your opinion on it, if you don't mind.

First off, I may have it go on only 8-10 more chapters. To me, it does seem long, but in order to incorportate the ideas I've came up with plus pacing wise I feel it'll work.

I really did like the idea you suggested of Edgar's friends finding out and how they would react, so I would like to use that for the next chapter. I think I'll include an argument between Michael and Charles about how they should go about it, including references to the chapters you wrote about Charles and Michael and the asylum. Don't worry, I'm definitely going to credit you for all of the ideas you've gave me, as they're great.

After that I may have a chapter involving the rebuilding of Charlie & Bradi's friendship. It's an idea that I've had circulating but I don't know if I should include it or not.

What you said about some of the preps having loyalty to Edgar stuck with me, and I'd love to include it. Perhaps a  (non-violent) coup d'etat? After all, since Edgar isn't much of a fighter he wouldn't want a gigantic brawl.

I'll have to include prom, so that'll be one chapter.

After that I'll probably have a chapter involving Charlie and Edgar bonding and have it show how Edgar's grew over the time of ANFAB.

I think I'll have the 2nd to last chapter be the graduation, and then the final chapter will be the final goodbye between everyone.

So, that's what I got planned. What do you think? Do you think anything should be altered or cut out?