User talk:Cdc1998

Fanfiction
Here is the text of the fanfiction you posted on Bully Wiki.

Jeff (talk|stalk) 19:09, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

All I can really say is have fun with it... Memai is the one that can help with the more serious aspect. I do it to have fun. I took writing classes in High School (that was ages ago, I'm 25 by the way). Yeah I love writing and if it wasn't for my night shift being from 10 pm until 4:30 in the morning I'd be up and writing more. MichaelDiaz101 06:40, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 18 is complete. -BBF (May 13, 2012; 5:12 PM)

I don't mind if you use C-Money for your next chapter or any other chapter that you make. Go ahead. -BBF (May 28, 2012; 6:17 PM)

I started on how our characters meet. It's from my P.O.V. Do you like it? MichaelDiaz101 02:36, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Your character's a Sophmore? lol So is mine. MichaelDiaz101 03:03, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

We need like a funny chapter. We should do one, one that isn't serious. Like when I was in High School they would make two Sophmore students plan parties and stuff (I got stuck doing that with my ex girlfriend). We should do a chapter like that. We can plan it out. MichaelDiaz101 03:17, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

I'll start planning when I'm done with my current episode. MichaelDiaz101 03:33, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

For my next chapter of my story, I'm going to have it set around the first few weeks of 2009 since most of my first story and almost half of my second story were set in 2008. -BBF (May 31, 2012; 8:41 PM)

Chapter 21 is complete. -BBF (June 10, 2012; 6:45 PM)

Weird, and don't worry. You won't lose her as a friend. If she rejects you then you might become better friends. Which is BIG points. Woman admire guys that will take a chance. MichaelDiaz101 02:02, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Answer
Alright, I'll delete them right now.

And as for a character page, it's not done through blog posts. You have to create a new wiki page. Hua Xiong 07:58, June 16, 2012 (UTC)


 * No, you don't have to if you don't want to. Hua Xiong 16:15, June 16, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 22 is complete. -BBF (June 18, 2012; 12:26 PM)

I don't really know about the whole gun thing but yeah. It's good. MichaelDiaz101 21:15, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 23 is complete. -BBF (June 25, 2012; 5:21 PM)

Chapter 24 is complete. -BBF (July 3, 2012; 1:10 PM)

Response
Nah, you're just looking too deeply into it. That's too much of a stretch. Hua Xiong 17:43, July 6, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 25 is complete. -BBF (July 8, 2012; 6:43 PM)

Sure, as long as you keep his personality the same. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 15:08, July 12, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, I have an idea for later. What if Michael moves out of his apartment and decides to move into the dorm, and what if he asks if he can move into your room? You don't have to say yes but I had an idea that Michael is so annoyed by his mom being drunk and his stepdad never being there he asks to move in with you. This could make chapters that involve both of us easier. MichaelDiaz101 17:10, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

This is kind of a sample. From your point of view.

Charles was sitting around bored out ''of his mind. Classes got out only an hour or so ago. Then his phone vibrated and he quickly got it open and read the texts from probably one of his closest friends Michael.''

''Michael: Dude, this might be rude but ugh......... Can I move in?''

''Charles: Don't worry about it. Caldwell hotel is indeed open.''

''Michael: lol okay. Be over in a few.''

About two hours later Michael knocks on the door. Charles opens the door and Michael comes in with his bed and other stuff that's his. His sister is helping him carry his bed in from the other side.

''"Sup dude?" Michael says to Charles. He drops his bed in a corner. ''

''"See ya later assbiter." Michael's sister says to him as she walks out of the room and closes the door behind her. Michael starts to unpack. "Hey, dude." Michael starts speaking. "I brought my xbox 360 and my tv. I noticed your room lacked both of those." Michael finishes.''

''"This is gonna be awesome!" Charles exclaims''

So yeah that is just a short sample. Write it in your way of course. MichaelDiaz101 18:35, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, I liked what you did with the chapter with Greg, but it could be better. In case you need a reference, just check the Greg Ryder character page I have on here of him so you know how he acts, how he feels about other people, and what he's been through so you can get a better depiction of him. I'd really appreciate that. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 19:27, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Hm, well, Greg would almost always have a smartass remark up his sleeve for just about any verbal situation. I think that I have an idea, which no one on here has done before. How bout Charles and Greg get in a fight over something Greg says about that girl in Cincinnatti? How bout he is trying to convince Charles to let her go, saying that he should forget about her, because he's probably never going to see her again, and since it never went very well for them, he trys the tough love thing with him. He trys breaking the cold truth to Charles, because someone had to tell him, that she is probably making out with some other guy, and that she doesn't give two shits about him. I know it's mean, but Greg tries to convince him otherwise. And, he wants to help him prove everyone wrong because of the rumors about Charles being gay because he hasn't flirted with any girls at the school. They get into a brawl, but (please bear with me here) Greg very narrowly wins and scoffs Charles, saying that he should have listened to what Greg had to say and not lashed out at him, because it was Charles that decided to get into it with Greg. Is it okay if I write this? Then you write a chapter from Charles point of view during that chapter? Then later after the fight, Charles apoligizes to Greg and then Greg accepts, and they become good friends?? I think it's a unique start to a friendship!

How about it? I think it would make good writing material. Get back to me after reading this message.

SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:51, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, cool. How bout, this kind of puts him in his place, making him think that he wasn't invincible or something because he excelled at martial arts more than his social peers, and he realizes that? Is that okay? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 03:27, July 14, 2012 (UTC)

Hey dude
Hey the chapter including the fight with Charles and Greg is out. Read it and tell me what you think. Make your next chapter with Charles' perspective when you get the time. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:02, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

"It's not important." Okay first off there is a hell of a more polite way to say it that was pretty damn rude. If I do say so myself. You made it seem like my work is total shit. Then you pull the whole "no offense" line in there at the end.

"Oh hey Michael, this doesn't exactly work for me. Maybe I can give you some pointers on how I want the chapter to go. If you don't mind." That is the polite way to put it dude. Manners is the key word there. Dude I really hope you aren't that rude to people in real life. The internet is a great place to act tough and be rude to people. Yeah I get it you're a kid but the same rules apply. Treat people the way you want to be treated. MichaelDiaz101 01:51, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

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That's exactly why I put the 'big boy' line there. Goodfellas is one of my all time favorite movies! SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:54, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Warning
Hey, I know you apoligized to Michael. And that's good. But you really could have said that in a more respectful way like he said. And I 110% agree with him, I hope you aren't rude like that to people in real life, and the Internet is a vast and wonderful place that you can take out your stress from real life onto someone else who you will never meet, you know? Since I read the reply you wrote, I have concluded that you didn't mean what you said, and may have been a little stressed, and said something that you didn't mean or that it came out wrong. But, I am being nice to you here, and I like you. But I have to uphold my job as an administrator and give you a warning. I'm giving you a warning because it seems like what you said came out wrong. So consider yourself lucky. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:16, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, I'm sorry. I didn't know. I go through the same problems as you do. And I can see why writing is a giant stress reliever for you. I'm grateful you understand that it's nothing against you, it's just my job to uphold the rules. And I understand you. Thank you telling me. It must have been hard to tell someone over the internet a personal thing like that. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:34, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 26 is complete. -TheToughGuy (July 15, 2012; 4:01 PM)

Hey I have an idea for a new chapter we could both write. If you're interested of course. Message me back. MichaelDiaz101 00:36, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

You don't have to do the moving in thing if you don't want too. I wasn't mad about that, in fact I wasn't mad at all. So here's an idea, write it any way you wish. I wish I could catch up to where you are in your story but I've been held up with work so I couldn't write much.

So the idea is like this. Michael has helped Charles with so many things and Michael joins a caged fighting tournument (Hope I spelled that right) and asks Charles to make sure the Greasers, Jocks, and Preps don't injure him outside of the cage because some of them are fighting. I apologize for not writing much, work is choking me basically and I can't just sit down and write. I will hurry up though. I started a chapter with the early adventures between Charles and Michael. It's a few days before the King of the Hill thing. MichaelDiaz101 01:14, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Just got the first part of Charles and Michael's encounter with Christy. Next I will do the King of the Hill. MichaelDiaz101 08:03, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Hey dude message me back when you get this please. So I'm taking Nicole down to Oregon to visit the Air Museum. I'm leaving Friday and so I'm trying to catch up with you and I'm almost caught up. This might leave me a little bit behind but I'm close to you. I should be back Monday and I'm leaving later tomorrow. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 21:00, July 19, 2012 (UTC)

Using Your OC
Yo Cdc1998, I'm planning two chapters where C-Money and another OC has gotten themselves info about one of the cliques I made up earlier in my story (The Hippies) and Gary Smith and Jerry Mendez have some meeting at the harbor in Blue Skies. I was wondering if I could use your OC to where both C-Money and Charles works together to disrupt the meeting. Also, this is how I have the chapters planned:

27: C-Money gets info from Michael about the meeting from the Hippies, so C-Money come asks Charles about helping disrupt the meeting, which will be the day after.

28: Both OCs goes to the harbor and battle the G.S. Crew (who are there to protect Gary and Jerry since The Hippies are pascifists). After they get battle the group and get some heroine and a folder, they go to a warehouse to check out the folder. After they read the info, both of them make a shocking discovery about C-Money's girlfriend when she walkes in the warehouse and express her identity.

You think that sounds good. Is there anything you want to add? -TheToughGuy (July 20, 2012; 12:03 PM)


 * Cdc1998, you mind or do you have anything to say about it? I just want to know if I have your opinion. -TheToughGuy (July 21, 2012; 12:59 PM)
 * Chapter 27 is complete. -TheToughGuy (July 22, 2012; 8:50 PM)

Charles build
Hey what is Charles physical build? Like I saw in one of your chapters that he's 5'11" (one inch shorter then Michael) but like how much does he weigh, what is his physical build, does he have a muscular build like Michael? MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 23:34, July 26, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 28 is complete. -TTG (July 29, 2012; 4:37 PM)

Chapter 29 is complete. -TTG (August 05, 2012; 3:39 PM)

Re: A Quick Question
From my dates in Chapters 21-26, my story is now on Janurary 17, since I skipped a week and a half in Chapter 27. It's still basically winter. -TTG (August 7, 2012; 7:21 PM)

Yes. Just keep it true to my idea. Michael had partnered with a High School friend that we'll meet in the later High School chapters. His organization is worldwide, helping Bullied students. But by night he is a hitman trying to stop crime in Liberty City, Michael lives is Bullworth which I assume is a 45 minute drive from Liberty City. Nobody knows his secret alterego as Black Arrow besides his wife, Nicole. Also will you continue writing Charles time through High School? I am. This stuff just comes later. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 05:04, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reply
Sure you can do that. Greg would be 22 in 2014. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 14:58, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Greg gets back from the war in the spring of 2020 (he's 28) and the next chapter is going to be Greg's birthday. Greg was a Corporal in the Marines. Sure, we could have our characters meet. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 17:46, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sure, that sounds good. But Greg doesn't have his own motorcycle, so I don't know how it's gonna work out. You have good ideas, though. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 03:45, August 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah it sounds good, though it would be interesting to say maybe the banks Charles is robbing is stealing from Charles' company and he's getting back at them through this, but it's your choice. How about you write everything leading up to the Bank Robbery and I'll write the Robbery? Also the chapter I've been planning is out. Well the first part anyways, It's called Michael's Future: Lady Killer. So read it and go ahead. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 06:19, August 10, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 30 is complete. -TTG (August 12, 2012; 3:48 PM)

Hey, I just included the bank robbery that Charles took place in. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 19:48, August 14, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, I just included the bank robbery that Charles took place in. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 19:53, August 14, 2012 (UTC)

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Go ahead and use it. Also yeah I saw the trailer and it is really good! MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 20:24, August 14, 2012 (UTC)

I like it. Hey I have this idea. What if Eddie knows about the two murders at Queen Industries. Charles finds out some way and tells Michael. The young girl Jimmy was with and the worker were killed at the Queen Industries building. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 23:18, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Oh I'm sorry dude. I was deprived in my childhood. My mother was always drunk, my dad left when I was young and my stepdad was an ass. When you graduate High School and move somewhere else and make new friends that's when the fun begins. Trust me. Also I'm the beer pong champion. :) MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 05:19, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah go for it bro. Thanks, I'm in it to win it. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 03:17, August 18, 2012 (UTC)

Check out My Question To You All: No. 06 when you get the chance. -TTG (August 20, 2012; 5:32 PM)

Well yeah that could work but Michael already had Jimmy leave the country to a secret location to get away from the murders. How about Eddie had spies inside Queen Industries and they assassinated to send a message. When Jimmy leaves he tries to target Michael but Michael ain't scared like Jimmy was. Yeah Charles is hanging out the window and Michael (actually Black Arrow but Charles doesn't know them yet) goes over and saves him from this. Charles tries to attack Black Arrow but his attacks fail and Black Arrow gets away and Michael then meets him but then Michael is arrested for aiding a suspected criminal the cops think Michael helped Jimmy. Charles helps Michael get free and in the next chapters Charles finds out somehow. Eddie suspects one of them is Black Arrow and so he sends like a hit team after both of them. They both make it out alive obviously. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 18:37, August 26, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 31 is complete. -TTG (August 26, 2012; 3:56 PM)

I got farther in my Future life chapter. I'm gonna write some of my High School chapters. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 19:28, September 2, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 32 is complete. -TTG (September 03, 2012; 4:09 PM)

I would say the stranger is pretty much in the dark as of right now. We don't know his agenda but he spoke of an enemy more powerful then Eddie, coming over the horizen. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 01:37, September 10, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 33 is complete. -TTG (September 11, 2012; 7:10 PM)

Thanks for the compliment on my profile pic. I forgot to tell you. You a fan of Kurt Cobain? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:43, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

He's my one of my idols. Third behind Stephen Spielberg and John Lennon :) SirLinkalot96 (talk) 22:01, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Have you listened to Sonic Youth before? They were such a killer band. Kurt practically worshipped them. Here's a link to a video of my favorite song by them. Check it out: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7XdYnh729IQ

SirLinkalot96 (talk) 22:59, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 34 is complete. -TTG (September 18, 2012; 6:45 PM)

Hey dude, haven't seen you in awhile. How've ya been? MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 06:09, September 25, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry dude. Yeah I'm good, just been training and working, while also working on the wedding. Did you watch Seahawks vs Greenbay Packers? The Packers got robbed!!! MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 23:11, September 27, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks dude. Also yes I agree that you should go to homecoming. You're only gonna get four of them unless you get held back, whether you have a date or not. I'm also gonna say that these dances aren't as fun as they used to (mostly because we did stuff that's against the law. lol) but you'll find a way to have fun. It just isn't about bringing a girl. Go with friends that don't have dates or go there and maybe get a lonely girl. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 22:45, September 28, 2012 (UTC)