User blog comment:TheToughGuy/My Review (Classic) - Manhunt series/@comment-4675595-20130523211337

Not a bad review, but there are definitely some points you could improve on. There are a few bits where you seemed to take a bit too long to get to your point, for example: "They can be used to hide yourself from enemies. They will make you almost completely invisible from the enemies. However, they [aren't] always the safest place to be in." It took three sentences to get to a point that could have been condensed into one ("Shadows will make you almost invisible to enemies, but they have ways of finding you.") It's good to keep this kind of writing quick, clear, and to the point, since the goal of a review is to inform.

Also, you start giving your personal opinion in the last paragraph of the Gameplay section. One would normally expect the Gameplay section of a review to be solely about, well, the gameplay itself, not the reviewer's opinion. If you want to include personal opinions, you should make a separate section for that, probably at the very end.

Another thing that stuck out to me was this line: "The story will last you probably around 20 hours or longer, depending on if you can overcome the enemies in your path and not get yourself killed nearly 10 times in each mission." The wording is a bit strange, and it's very vague. Do you mean that the game is difficult? Otherwise it sounds like you're just saying "the game will take you X amount of hours, unless you suck at it," which is true of any game :P

SORRY IF THIS SOUNDS LIKE I'M BEING OVERLY-CRITICAL! Overall it wasn't bad, it's just that some things need a bit of cleaning up. Aside from all that, this was a very informative review, and speaking as someone who has never played this series, I feel like I have a good idea of what to expect should I ever pick up this game. Hope this helps!