User blog comment:TheToughGuy/The Final Year At Bullworth For C-Money: Chp. 24/@comment-1824274-20130705171819

No offense, but this chapter is more over-the-top and unrealistic than usual, and leaves me with more questions than answers: Why would Kemp give the diamonds to a minor? Why didn't he take them as evidence? Isn't that his job as a police officer? Why would the Mayor supply Gary with weapons in order to terrorize the very town he runs? The Mayor wouldn't get mixed up in something such as this, you know? It just doesn't make any sense.

I know this may seem like a harsh critique, but that's what I get from this chapter.