User blog comment:MichaelDiaz101/Michael's a Junior: Part 12/@comment-4833053-20130318015505/@comment-4833053-20130318031647

Sounds good man. I also have an idea for my next chapter and the chapter after homecoming. So here's my chapter 40 idea.

Charles gets saturday detention that goes from 7:00 Am to 4:00 PM for making a false alarm a few days after his fight with Patrick. Also there is Mandy, Pinky, Ted, and Patrick himself. And of course, Vice Principal Johnson supervises it, and it's help in the libary with most of the prefects wandering around. During Johnson's speech telling them to write an essay explaining who they are. During that Charles back talks Johnson and ranks up an extra 8 saturday detentions, instead which Johnson turns into Charles' suspension(which takes effect after homecoming). Charles then tries to talk to the others nicely(except Patrick, who is avoiding Charles and Charles does the same), until they ignore him and he decides to be a complete asshole.

After badmouthing everyone(except patrick) they get fed up and Ted challenges Charles to a fight, and Ted says he'll knock Charles out with two hits. Charles punches Ted, and Ted wrestles with him, until Charles kicks him off, and pulls out a switchblade, threatening to stab him. Both of them then sit back down. After still talking Johnson comes back and him & Charles argue again, and then they ask what will they do for lunch. Johnson says they will eat in the libary, and sends Patrick & Mandy to get food. Charles then decides to go get something out of his locker, which everbody else follows him to. They then notice Johnson making his way back to the libary, and charles takes one for the team to get caught so they can escape. Charles then gets his stuff, and Johnson locks him in the janitor's closet, which he then escapes and goes back to the libary.

Everybody then talks over the next few hours, and towards 2:30 they all discuss why they are there: charles for the false alarm, Patrick for knocking out the teachers & Johnson, Pinky for leaving school to go shopping, etc. Then they all start fighting again saying what will happen when the week starts again, and they all go back to their individual selves/cliques, and Charles goes off on Mandy & Pinky, and Ted who said that Charles shouldn't even exist earlier in the day. Charles makes Pinky & Mandy come to tears and they both say that they hate him. Patrick then finally talks after being silent for the day. Then they talk, the detention is over, and they all leave.

What do you think wou;d be good for Ted & Mandy to get detention for? Also do you know what film this is based off of?

Chapter 41 is homecoming.

Chapter 42: Charles & Patrick are forced to actually help each other and then learn alot about each other, developing a friendship.

So, what do you think?