Thread:Cdc1998/@comment-5385060-20151201140238/@comment-4833053-20151202061729

Sorry for the late reply, I was busy finishing up applying to colleges today. Now I'm 100% done and can somewhat relax!

Thank you for taking the time to give me feedback on it. I really appreciate it. Honestly, I would suggest that you don't go back and read any of my previous stories. Those were absolutely horrendous. During that time I was not familiar with how to properly write. I already know I'm not the best writer, but looking back at how terrible that was I've come a long way. The only thing you would miss is some references to past events that occurred, and a little bit of Charles' past, which I later mention in chapter 6 I believe (it's either 5 or 6, I honestly forget).

Also, thank you about the comment for the first three paragraphs/the start. Having a strong start is something I semi-struggle with in my writing. That, and names, as I am the worse at coming up with names for stories and protagonists. It's good to know that the start turned out well. As you continue on, you'll notice that some of the chapters seem dull compared to others, and I apologize for that, as I go through writer's block often. Nonetheless, I hope you enjoy it.

On a side note, I wanted to inform you that I'll be releasing one more chapter of ANFAB before I take a break to write that holiday themed short story I mentioned to you. I'll begin work on both of those sometime next week. Also, I read your story, 'Tis The Season, and I really enjoyed it. It was a fun read, and I really enjoyed how you portrayed your characters. I especially liked the interractions between Josh and Gary, and the performance the characters gave of A Christmas Carol. It was really well written and captivating, and I can't wait to see what you continue to write in Behind The Mask (which reminds me, I need to catch up on finishing reading that)

Again, thank you for taking the time to give me feedback on the story. I greatly appreciate it.