Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-5385060-20170623050546/@comment-5385060-20170623200037

I made some of the changes you suggested, adding a little more detail to her fixation on Milo into the section of her back story, and added a bit addressing that she has probably missed a lot of school in a "academic" section.

Is that the sort of thing you had in mind, to make it easier to relate to her?