User blog comment:TheToughGuy/The Final Year At Bullworth For C-Money: Chp. 10/@comment-4059927-20130310200000

My complaint is some of the jumping around, first you had it at Tuesday, 5:37 PM. Then you had it as "Right after my first class" you don't have to change it but you should write something like "The following day" or something like that.