User blog comment:Cdc1998/A New Face at Bullworth: Part 3/@comment-26358727-20150621012055

I really enjoy the depth you're presenting in Charlie's character.

Also, I want to note that I'm very into the approach you've taken in writing this story. While you're writing it in the first person from Edgar's point of view, you're really focusing on his vision of Charlie's struggles. It reminds me a lot of the approach Fitzgerald took in his 'The Great Gatsby', which I initially picked up for the storytelling style.

I encourage you to keep at it; I'm anxious to see where you go with it!