Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-4833053-20151119031731/@comment-4059927-20151119032609

I think the story is excellent, one of the best rising stories on our wiki. The only issue I've had is the real lack of development in Edgar, who is yet to be fleshed out and if your story is to be ten chapters long then it deeply saddens me that we did not get to see the development and characterization of Edgar as a whole.

We know Edgar is rich, but is only a Prep by mere appropriation and nothing more, but what about how he feels in certain situations or his personality. He's a very intriguing wallflower character and I'd love to see him focused on in the story. Not just Charles, or Jimmy/Bradi, but to see Edgar more for who he really is, and understand how he feels.