User blog comment:Cdc1998/A New Face at Bullworth: Part 3/@comment-4833053-20150622084804/@comment-26358727-20150622203648

You should never worry about length when it comes to what you write. If you've got a story to tell, tell it - don't limit yourself. As for the second thought, you brought some very human-like qualities to Charlie. Even the most laid-back and genuine individuals carry their own burdens, so it's great that you captured this side of Charlie from his own perspective. It was a great angle to see ( :

I look forward to reading more - especially considering we still don't know what Charlie talked about with Nicole (  You've got an engaging cast of characters here, so it's exciting to see new situations unfold in which they complement each other.