User blog comment:MichaelDiaz101/Flowers for a Girl/@comment-26358727-20171227133324/@comment-4059927-20171227192432

Thank you so much! One of the things I've always worked hard to capture is teenage dialogue. I'm quite a few years out from being that angsty teen but capturing the dialogue of youth is something I've felt I coudl convey strongly. Hell, they should have me write scripts for tv shows featuring kids because from what I've seen kids don't talk like how they talk in those shows. xD

I've always kind of missed the attention to detail in my writing and with each new entry I begin to get a firmer grasp on certain details like what someone is wearing, or the general layout of a room. It feels good to get some feedback on that, thank you so much!