User blog:PrettyRaveGirl/I'll admit this now...

I know my stories aren't getting read and I know why :(

HERE ARE THE REASONS WHY: I'm just trying to get people to read my story...
 * They are too girly and describe alot of details on what my character wears for every scene.
 * There's not enough action in the story to make it interesting.
 * There's paranormal activity involved---which no one likes.
 * I take too long to type them up.
 * Has too many bad words (even though it's something that I like).
 * The chapter is WAY too long.
 * Or I have too many errors in my story...

Is there anything I should change to get a person's attention?