User blog comment:SodaCat/Millstone - aurora/@comment-26358727-20151101234250

I have to say, Soda, I think "probably to hit each other with wrenches and shit" is my favourite line from you out of anything you've ever written. And not in a joking way, either - it's comedic, but it comes out so natural because the narrator is a character like Tom. It's absolutely brilliant!

I'm glad to see another chapter of this story, though. I really like the atmosphere, and the style it's written in is really working wonders for the build-up. You can never see it coming until it comes, but when you go back and evaluate it all afterwards, the pieces are all right there in front of you.

That, and your characterization of these two is spot-on.

Can't wait to read more!