User blog comment:TheToughGuy/The Next Year At Bullworth For C-Money: Chp. 4/@comment-4675595-20120207165454

"I happen to be a excellent drawer in both those classes." I think you meant artist? A drawer is the thing you keep stuff in.

Also, I've been trying to keep up with this, but I'm not sure where you're actually going with this story? There are a lot of parts where you seem to get side-tracked - the tangent about the radio station, for example - and the conversations seem to drag a bit. It gets a little hard to follow at times. Would you like some critique?