User blog comment:TheToughGuy/The Next Year At Bullworth For C-Money: Chp. 23/@comment-4369319-20120626193944

Just a wee note, since you'll be including these elements into your story again:

- You don't need to tell us about a 25% off gun ;> I'd feel unsafe if the shopowner marked the price down by any fraction XD You also don't need to state the price-- just say your characters bought the things for considerably less than they thought it'd cost :> Ditto with the "We have a new website opening in 2009" deal-- because no one actually says that IRL, and I used to work in retail XD

- Also, when buying guns, if I'm not mistaken, most reputable suppliers will do background checks and ask for a license or some form of identification. Less established places would probably overlook this, but if they can afford discounts and a crier for their new website, they seem to have a couple of pennies to rub together ;>