User talk:TheToughGuy

Welcome
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Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- JennyVincent (Talk) 23:57, November 18, 2010

Yeah man, you can run along my story, and I will ask Jenny and Sirlinksalot. At0micb0mb123 00:02, November 20, 2010 (UTC)

Hey. At0micb0mb123 talked to me about writing with us. Who's ur character? What's his personality? Make a character page about him so me and At0micb0mb123 can know what he's all about. If you can do that, then you can join our team. SirLinkalot96 00:43, November 20, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

C-Money
He sounds like a Townie for some reason. Kingofawosmeness777 03:41, November 20, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, a word of advice: You know on Brian Davidson's and Greg Ryder's character pages that there's anime like pics of them? Well, you should do that for C-Money. Go on www.tektek.org and go on the avatar simulator. Then create C-Money. And when u do, right click the pic and save it on ur computer, and go back on here and click on the 'add photo' on C-Money's page. SirLinkalot96 04:48, November 20, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Hey, check out my latest blog. SirLinkalot96 05:10, November 20, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

I'd be HAPPY to make a pic 4 you. I will send it to your talk page and see if you like it. Does C-Money look like a gangster or something? I will make it 4 you if it's cool with you. SirLinkalot96 20:22, November 20, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Is this a good C-Money Avatar? SirLinkalot96 04:49, November 21, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Hey dude, yeah I have an idea. So you're exploring the school and you walk into Harrington House where you get ambushed by the Preppies. I come in and join the fight. I'm still working out some minor thoughts but, whatcha think? At0micb0mb123 02:13, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thanksgiving Day Contest
Hello, BULLY'S BIGGEST FAN!

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Good luck,

 Jenny Vincent  ♥♦♣♠( Talk to me! ) 06:20, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Re: C-Money's Avatar
No prob. Least I could do. SirLinkalot96 00:49, November 24, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

I added it in. At0micb0mb123 19:37, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

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 Jenny Vincent the Greaser  ♣( Talk to me! ) 19:55, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Read chapter 21, it's out! At0micb0mb123 22:58, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, sure we could do that. At0micb0mb123 18:46, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, thats what I mean. At0micb0mb123 02:23, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, chapter 1 of part 4 is out. Check it out! SirLinkalot96 23:28, November 29, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

It's a good idea, but you will have to write that chapter, cuz I'm busy writing the boxing chapter. SirLinkalot96 02:26, November 30, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Re:Chapter 5 Planning
Sure! I'm so happy I know what people mean by getting jumped now!!! Anyway, back to the point: Of course you can!! It's cool with me.  Jenny Vincent the Greaser  ♣( Talk to me! ) 23:28, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Go for, dude. At0micb0mb123 00:05, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, go for it. SirLinkalot96 20:02, December 7, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Hey. I just made a prequel of the Greg Ryder Saga. It looks into more how Greg's dad was killed. Check it out! SirLinkalot96 03:14, December 10, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

You could use Malcolm as the secreat good fighter that Derby will send after C-Money, you can tell me about what you think and we could set somthing up. Kingofawosmeness777 20:41, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yea, thats a great idea. But how about Derby sends me to beat you up like you said. And I find you in the Boy's Dorm and we have at it. Note that Malcolm is a much more skillfull fighter than just charging at someone. So it would seem more aproprate for him to box C-Money instead of charge him. So Malcolm beats up C-Money pretty bad but then instead of hitting me with a fire extunguisher you slam me into the poker table and it breaks. But then C-Money wants to keep fighting me and I get back up and we fight agian. But Greg and Brian come by and explain how I'm Greg's firend since the boxing match between us and with Brian becuase of the situation with the Townies that I put in part 16 of my story. So we stop fighting and I get off of you and we agree to work together to stop the situation with the Townies in chapter 16. Kingofawosmeness777 21:59, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, you guys let me know when you want to go ahead and do the chapter. Kingofawosmeness777 23:08, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

I got an idea. How bout since C-Money is good friends with Greg and Brian, C-Money is kinda scared of being shot at and nearly being killed, so he tells Greg and Brian. And then Greg and Brian tell C-Money about the life they just recently left. And C-Money asks them to look for the person who killed his father and mom. And Greg and Brian travel to Carcer City to help him. Is that cool? Tell me if it's a good idea or not and even add some stuff to it if you want. SirLinkalot96 18:42, December 15, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Yea, I'll start writing soon. Kingofawosmeness777 03:32, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

I'm done with the chapter, check it out and tell everyone else to check it out. Kingofawosmeness777 04:17, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Okay. I will tell him later cuz im on my way to school now. SirLinkalot96 11:29, December 16, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Hey, I just made a new blog. Check it out! SirLinkalot96 22:23, December 19, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

C-Money
I was wondering, how tall is C-Money? Kingofawosmeness777 00:54, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yo, are ya ready for the chapters in Carcer City? SirLinkalot96 02:14, December 20, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Yea, it's fine. Malcolm drives a PMP-600. Kingofawosmeness777 01:17, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks man. Kingofawosmeness777 01:22, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Check out my new insane blog post, Maclom starts his own country. Kingofawosmeness777 02:57, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, go ahead. SirLinkalot96 18:14, December 24, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Hey, man. Check out my latest blog post. Comment and tell me what you think of it. SirLinkalot96 20:25, December 27, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Hey, man. I saw it, and check out my alternate reality story the zombie apocalypse. Now I'm havin' troubles with the next chapter but you can write that chapter you wanted to write. The reason I'm having trouble is because everyone is starting over and the planning I'm having for the story is getting much harder. But by all means write your next chapter because I'll catch up with ya. At0micb0mb123 00:25, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, the first zombie chapter is out. Read it. SirLinkalot96 01:31, December 28, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Yo. Check out the second zombie chapter I made. Hey, are you going to make a zombie story too? SirLinkalot96 18:34, December 29, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

How bout something with the word 'Apocolypse' in it for a title? SirLinkalot96 20:05, December 29, 2010 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Sorry I confused you with Bullyrocks. Kingofawosmeness777 00:53, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Check out the first chapter to my new series. At0micb0mb123 22:54, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I couldn't write you. Working all week. But if you think the quality of your chapter is not of your taste then rewrite. 'Cause I'm not gonna say "oh yeah that chapter sucks." It's purely your decision. At0micb0mb123 05:54, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Deleting a blog
It's not possible for regular users, but it is for admins and bureaucrats. What blog would you like deleted?  Jenny  ♣( Talk to me! ) 21:42, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blog
Read my newest blog that features C-Money. Kingofawosmeness777 20:59, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

Warning
This is a useless, stupid comment.

It is far more likely that at0micb0mb was some weirdo who made up multiple personalities to entertain himself on the internet than it is that checkuser made a mistake.

Checkuser is a time tested and proven program, and it wasn't "bought off E-bay".

And no one is going to be "sorry for what they did".

Now if at0micb0mb is such a good friend that you know him in real life, then it should be fairly easy for all concerned to prove his innocence. And if you don't know him in real life then you don't have any reason to trust his word over Checkuser's. McJeff (talk this way)/(stalk this way) 00:51, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sure man. I am a little sad, but more disappointed. I will keep writing. We should keep his OC alive a little longer. He's seventeen, right? We should have him graduate and go into the army. That's what A-bomb would want. SirLinkalot96 00:53, February 18, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

I'm friends with him on XBOX Live, but I have only played GTA 4 and Red Dead and Black Ops a few times with him. I think Brian should leave Bullworth. He was planning for him to go into the army. SirLinkalot96 18:13, February 20, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Brian leaves and goes into the army and gets killed. In one of the chapters Greg could get a letter saying that Brian was killed in Afghanistan. It could take place 2 months later after the Carcer City chapters. SirLinkalot96 01:46, February 23, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Don't worry, I'll be combining my original and my chapters from The Bullworth Story of Mikaela Whitesides.

I changed my mind. Let's have Brian get killed in Carcer City. How bout Brian gets captured, then a bomb goes off in a building with Brian, James, and his sister inside? We shouldn't keep writing about a blocked user's OC's, dude. SirLinkalot96 01:34, February 26, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Okay, how bout on the 3rd Carcer City Chapter? SirLinkalot96 19:53, February 26, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Hey, we should ask Jenny. SirLinkalot96 20:15, February 26, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

We should ask because she didn't want us to use Brian when he got blocked; she wanted us to cut him from future chapters ''entirely. ''Why don't we ask her because she could block us both if we use him without her consent. Ya know? SirLinkalot96 20:21, February 26, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

You should ask her, cuz you've been using him in our chapters. Is that cool with you? SirLinkalot96 20:30, February 26, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Alright, man. Let me know when your ready and I'll come in and back you up. SirLinkalot96 20:36, February 26, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

We won't get blocked for asking, but if we ask, and she says no and we use him anyway, then it's going to be baaaad. She could block us for up to a week or less, at my estimate. Remember, if she says no, we have to kill him off right away. But if she says yes, then we'll keep him for a couple chapters, then we kill him off in the 3rd. That sound fair? SirLinkalot96 20:53, February 26, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Brian Davidson
No, use him for one last chapter but don't kill him off.  Jenny  ♣( ♫♪♫♪ ) 17:34, February 27, 2011 (UTC)


 * Them too. All of A-Bomb and Bullyrocks! OCs should be removed.  Jenny  ♣( ♫♪♫♪ ) 18:13, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Saw the message on Jenny's talk page. How bout Brian leaves to go into army and James goes to college. Is that good? And Greg and C-Money go to Carcer City to find C-Money's parent's murder. How bout that? One more thing, can you just leave me a new message instead of editing a section on my talk page? It makes it a lot easier for me to read your message. SirLinkalot96 01:06, March 3, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Alright, I understand. SirLinkalot96 22:45, March 4, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Already did. ^^ Courage and heart cannot be lost or torn apart, together we will pull each other through. You know who&#39;s got the power. 21:09, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

I know. I can't believe I didn't see how he was a sock. It was because of the spelling. SirLinkalot96 18:50, March 13, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Hey, I just finished a 'Future Greg Ryder' chapter. You should check it out. I'm planning to have C-Money in the next one, if that's okay with you. What do you want C-Money's future job to be? What did he do within the 10 years after everyone graduated Bullworth? I need to know if I'm gonna plan it. SirLinkalot96 00:24, March 26, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

K. Are you gonna make one for C-Money? I'm just procrastinating by doing these stories because I'm trying to plan out the next Greg Ryder chapter. SirLinkalot96 00:34, March 26, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Alright, man. I was just throwin the idea out there :) SirLinkalot96 00:45, March 26, 2011 (UTC)SirLinkalot96

Huh? Coloured Flames 03:50, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

He WAS an original character of a banned user, so probably not. SirLinkalot96 02:20, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

How bout he was sentenced for life in jail? SirLinkalot96 16:52, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

sure SirLinkalot96 17:02, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reply
That depends. I want to know how you want to use her in your story. If it clashes with anything I have planned out for her, then the answer would be no. ♦ Scarly ♦ Graphics Gallery 17:30, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

I don't like the sound of that. It sounds like he's going to be romantically involved with her. I don't have my OCs dating other people's OCs. I prefer to know exactly what's going to happen with my OCs, and write the scene with whoever wants to add them, that way they stay in character. ♣ Scarly ♠ Dream ♣ 21:02, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still a little unsure. I would want to write the conversation between them with you. It's also a little difficult with Cody being there with the Townies, because in my story "Revenege" due to her break up with Edgar, and she begins dating Gary, she doesn't really have much connection with them anymore. I just keep her as a Townie, because she was expelled. ♣ Scarly ♠ Dream ♣ 21:26, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

I think we should change Gary to being a juvenile delinquent, not a 'legendary criminal' I mean, he's only 16 haha. And Andrew should be the criminal, ya know? SirLinkalot96 00:17, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you update the relationship between Greg Ryder and C-Money on C-Money's character page? I will do the same for Greg's. Also, do you want me to copy and paste the things from your user page on Bully Wiki onto your profile here? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:17, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, I'm looking up the phrases that C-Money and Kendra were saying in Russian. I'll give them to you if you want them. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 16:54, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Russian Phrases
Here are the phrases to what C-Money and Kendra were saying in chapter 27. I got this from Google Translate.

Can you understand what I am saying? -Можете ли вы понять, что я говорю?

Yes- да

I hate the preps and other source of rich scum, but I love The Outsiders- Я ненавижуPreps и другиеисточникбогатойсволочи, но ялюблю читатьАутсайдеры

Me too- Я тоже

Hope this helps you out. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 17:04, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

No problem haha. You could say it in Russian and put the English translation in parenthesis. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 17:09, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reply
I'm not sure how to with the new editor, but I asked CC. Meanwhile, I managed to turn comments on by quickly chaning the new editor to the old and turning them on. As soon as Community Central replies, I'll tell you, okay? <font size= "+1" face="Segoe Print"> Soda  ﻿<font size= "+1" face="Segoe Print"> Cat☠  21:12, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

The new chapter's complete. It's epic. . SirLinkalot96 (talk) 22:10, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

You should make a chapter of the party. Give C-Money's point of view on things. I mean, Greg didn't know what happened after he smoked with Ricky, so maybe you could shed some light on what happened? And even have us find out what happened to C-Money? That'd be awesome. You're not really going along the lines of someone else's work, you're making up what happened after what I described happened. How bout C-Money gets in trouble for being in the pictures as well? So they both stay the entire summer? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:58, June 24, 2011 (UTC)


 * Ha, no problem XD I just found out the only way to get coments on is through admins and b'crats... this new editor sucks slightly. :/ ﻿<font size= "+1" face="Segoe Print"> Soda  ﻿<font size= "+1" face="Segoe Print"> Cat☠  02:45, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Hey just a question. I am leaving tomorrow but I might try to finish that chapter tonight and you agreed that we would meet in the chapter but just one question. How tall is C-Money? MichaelDiaz101 03:42, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

When I asked you you said he was 6 feet tall. Kingofawosmeness777 17:34, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, I finished the chapter and can I ask you to do the rest? Your character showing mine around campus. Am I acting to stingy? MichaelDiaz101 17:58, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Me being too lazy and wanting you to do the next part. That's what I kind of meant by it. I don't want to sound too stingy that I'm asking you to do it first before I do. MichaelDiaz101 19:50, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Because I have writers block and could probably get an idea from you in the future. MichaelDiaz101 05:36, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that's actually a really good idea. I'm going to plan about it and I'll start writing in a bit. Thank you. MichaelDiaz101 17:43, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

You used the new chat thing yet? MichaelDiaz101 17:52, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reply
That was at Bully Wiki. Over here he has a clean slate and can edit as long as he behaves and doesn't use sockpuppetry. Dan the Man 1983 23:54, July 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * Yeah, they are two different wiki. Dan the Man 1983 00:09, July 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * If I catch him, he'll be blocked. Dan the Man 1983 01:33, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, would you be interested in writing Red Dead fanon? A friend of mine has started one up and we could use some users. MichaelDiaz101 23:35, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

Alright man, that's fine. Just had to ask. MichaelDiaz101 17:40, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Congrats on being the number #1 on the wiki!Silverfaust89 13:48, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Planning
Alright, for the next chapter I'm gonna make, I think I'm gonna have Greg do something to the Jocks because C-Money's under dorm arrest because of them. So, what should Greg do? Should he do something with the tag? I'm stuck. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:46, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, are you going to write in when you and Michael meet? I understand that your story right now is before Michael arrives at Bullworth. MichaelDiaz101 01:23, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, the new chapter is complete if you want to check it out. It's awesome :) SirLinkalot96 (talk) 22:16, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, man. Check out my latest chapter. It might give you an idea of what to do next. Don't finish the chapter without reading it. It has to do with the robbery and I hope you're okay with it happening. I didn't finish it yet, and I don't want to until you catch up, ok? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 19:08, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, cool. So you want me to remove that last bit where C-Money looks like he's going to kill Max but keep the rest? Sure, I'll change it. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 00:03, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, Greg's on dorm arrest for being in the pictures as well. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 00:07, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, cool. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 00:13, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

The chapter's complete. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:01, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, is it cool with you that Michael is going to be part of our writing team? Like his character will be a central character in our stories and stuff? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 00:58, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

It's basically someone who's one of the main characters. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 16:55, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think you are. Everyone needs a break SirLinkalot96 (talk) 18:09, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, have you read Michael Diaz's days at Bullworth 4? That is something that we could both put into our stories. It's when Ryan Irvin frames Michael and C-Money for starting a fire and it is something that we could use as war starter against the jocks. MichaelDiaz101 00:22, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

The latest chapter is out. If you want to read it, well, you know what to do. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 04:44, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, I'm starting over my story. How should we meet? Happy new years too. MichaelDiaz101 20:30, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

K, I'll check it out. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 23:53, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Our characters should meet soon. Like they run into each other doing something. Like you get in a fight with a few Jocks and Michael's playing a prank or fighting with them as well. MichaelDiaz101 19:02, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Rollback rights
Interested in becoming a patroller? Hua Xiong 23:16, February 3, 2012 (UTC)


 * Basically, if someone vandalizes a page and does more than one edit, you can use the rollback, which reverts all of his edits with one click of a button. When you do that, you inform me or Link. Since you have been on this wiki for a long while, I thought maybe you'd be interested.


 * So what do you say? Hua Xiong 22:13, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

To add in on this discussion, it's not really that big of a job. You can still write fan fic and everything. You're just a trusted editor, and it's like an honorary title. You only need to rollback when you have to. You really only use it when someone's vandalizing stuff. I'm not pressuring you to do this, but I just wanted to give you my input, since I used to be a patroller. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 22:32, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Right! As of now, you're a patroller. =)

Don't sweat it, like Link said, it's an honorary title, and in the case there's a vandal and we're not online, you can revert the person's edits using the rollback button next to the undo. Hua Xiong 22:42, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re: Wow
Yeah, man! Congrats on the patroller title! I feel like things are gonna change for the better around here, don't you? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 23:00, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Of course I do. We all wish he hadn't done that, but I gotta admit, he DID keep this place alive while he was here. I also miss the 'glory days' when we were writing fan fic on Bully Wiki. That's where it all started. I loved that summer where Dan, McJeff, A-bomb and his sockpuppets, Kate, Jenny/Soda, you, Winter Moon, and several others would all just talk, like a big group of friends. Those times were fun, I admit. But, that was then, and this was now (forgive my pun) and we need to focus on bringing this place back to life, know what I mean? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 00:04, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I always wish that. Even though A-bomb manipulated and used us for his own amusement, he did keep the place alive... It's kinda weird for me to say that, huh? I mean, it was wrong what he did, and I pity him for it, but I guess you know where I'm coming from. Keep up the good work, Patroller :) SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:32, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You're already a patroller, yes. Hua Xiong 12:04, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hey..
Are you okay? You haven't been writing lately. If it's about the new unofficial, somewhat unapproved 'critics' of the wiki, just don't take it too personal. We'll settle things with them. We removed all the stuff that they said about C-Money, because it broke a core policy, "Please be civil at all times"

I know this sounds weird from someone saying this over the Internet, but don't give up writing!! Never let bad critics bring you down. You've been a good friend, and we could make Clayton Mason and Greg Ryder come back better than ever! What do you think?

SirLinkalot96 (talk) 19:24, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Yea, its fine if you use him. Kingofawosmeness777 22:31, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reply
Hey, thanks for the concern. I've been incredibly busy with schoolwork and my personal life. I would love to write new chapters if I had the time. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:21, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, I think I just accidently created something that can be added to our stories. Whitney is connected to Gary (it was revealed later in the chapter I just wrote), and Gary is connected to a gang trying to kill you? So it looks like we have a double antagonist in the story!

MichaelDiaz101 05:59, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Your blog post & ideas:
You have some great blog posts & ideas for stuff,my favorite one is the c-money one(something ironic is in real life,i'm called c-butta by my friends).If you get time do you think you can look at one blog post I wrote? I can't think of anthing to write and need some ideas(if you do read it it is "the warriors come to bullworth")Cdc1998 00:28, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Don't have to ask. Go for it man. MichaelDiaz101 03:03, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

If you get a minute can you read this?:
Hey,I heard you said that you're going to be going back to "The Next Year at Bullworth of C-Money" after you're thing with the jimmy hopkins and I was wondering could I include C-Money again.I'm writing my chapter 8 finally,I havent had any ideas so thats why I didn't write anything.Its gonna be about the jocks offering a fake truce between them & my character,and they want him to meet him at Comrades(you know,that bar from gta 4,I just though of the idea of another one but it being in bullworth,the old bullworth vale side though) but tell him not to be packed,but my character being my character and like other people,sneaks in something anyway,but he asks C-Money to come for backup.Then they start talking and Ted brings up stuff to try to break my balls(its personal stuff that would hit a guy like a punch to the gut) and when he pushes it,my guy breaks a bottle in his face,causing the jocks to fight me & you,and then the cops come trying to arrest people,then we escape,but Ted,Damon,and some other jocks follow us,we fight,knock them out, and then it ends.SoI was just wondering could I include C-Money again?Cdc1998 03:27, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

My Chapter 8 is completeCdc1998 01:18, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, since we're both using Whitney we can both mutually edit his page. Good idea? 63.155.134.167 01:04, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

^That was me by the way. I was logged out... Again. MichaelDiaz101 01:05, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, I'm bored right now and I think I might write another chapter for my character.I just want to know that if I was to try to keep my story canon with yours(time wise),what time would you have your story(the next year at bullworth for c-money) at now? I think I might make a chapter or two after one or two more chapters in bulworth where my character heads up to liberty city and gets mixed up in some stuff with the mafiaCdc1998 16:39, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks man.Cdc1998 03:16, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Hey,in case you want to read them my chapters 9 & 10 are done.If you do read them can I get your opinion on them?Cdc1998 18:08, June 2, 2012 (UTC)

Your Story~
Plot is a good place to start :>

The Dead Eye was the thing that slows everything down in the Red Dead series, wasn't it? (My Xbox died before I could get very far in it) If so, you should probably cut that, because it seems like a silly plot device, and it makes your character seem even more overpowered than he already is. A good thing to remember is that plot stems from conflict - if your hero can just breeze passed every obstacle and come out unchanged, then nobody is going to care about what happens to him, because there's nothing at stake. I'll get more into that later, if you want.

If you want to keep this as a Bully story, the whole deal with Max isn't going to work. Admittedly, I've only skimmed through most of your chapters, but Max is some kind of dangerous criminal, isn't he? There were even mentions of the FBI being involved, if I remember correctly. Realistically - hell, even in the most over-the-top Tarantino flicks - that is not the kind of thing that a teenager can get mixed up in. Presumably, if such a high-profile criminal is hiding from the police, he's going to take a lot of precautions. And if the police, who are professionally trained to hunt down people like that, can't get their hands on him, there is no way that some kid is going to be able to take him down, or even find him.

But, if you really want this to be some kind of crazy crime-related revenge story, then why not make it an original story, or at least a GTA fanfiction? At this point, it seems like all the lead characters are OCs, they're rarely even in Bullworth anymore, and this whole thing would make more sense if your protagonist were an adult.

I'd still be willing to help out either way, though if you go with making it a GTA fic, I don't have much knowledge of that canon. ;;

But if you want to keep it as a Bullworth fanfiction, maybe it can be as a kind of prequel to all that Max craziness. Your character's backstory is the same, but he isn't ready to go out and start shooting down people just yet. Realistically, he wouldn't be - even though he's supposedly some tough kid who didn't get along with his mother, her dying would have some kind of impact on him, especially considering she was murdered. That sort of thing messes with your psyche. I'd recommend doing some research into some psychological effects of traumatic incidents, because your character goes through a lot of those over the course of your story, but seems to just shrug them off like they're no big deal. That's part of the reason why it's really hard to care about him - he's completely unaffected by everything, so it's like reading about a robot. Though he may not always show it on the outside, your character would be affected by the world around him, and it'd give some depth to the conflicts he'd face at Bullworth. The kid's got a lot on his plate already, and now he has to deal with all this clique nonsense. That has a lot of potential for an interesting story.

As for the whole Gary thing, I remember reading about him trying to kill somebody? It's been a while since I've read about the "GS Crew" thing, so I could be mistaken - and I really hope that I am. See, Gary was a prick, but he wasn't evil. All he wanted was control, and he used his words to get it. The whole plot of the game was driven by the lies and rumors he spread around in order to manipulate others, and the only time he became violent was at the very end, when Jimmy chases him down. He never intends to cause any serious physical harm - you never see him pull out a gun or a knife on anyone - and Gary certainly doesn't try to kill people. He didn't want anybody dead then, and he certainly wouldn't want anybody dead now.

But aside from that, I don't think it's too far-fetched to have him try to get revenge on Bullworth, or at least Jimmy. After all, he was so close to running the whole show, and then he got booted out. But, you have to keep in mind what kind of character he is - essentially, Gary's a clever kid with a big ego and a grudge. But he'd also probably be less hostile than in the game, because he'd be properly medicated (after all, the last time he went off his meds, he wrecked an entire school - his parents, teachers, and absolutely everyone would make sure that he never skipped a pill again). Gary would have all kinds of inside knowledge about the school and its students, but if he wanted to cause any damage, he'd find someone else to do the dirty work for him, and not be very hands-on about the whole thing. So, yes, the "GS Crew" (though I'm not a big fan of the name, in all honesty) can happen, but it'd have to be handled differently.

'''Basically, it seems like there can be two different stories here - one about your character's highschool years at Bullworth, and another about his adulthood, trying to avenge his parents. Both of these storylines would have a lot going on, so I recommend doing them one at a time. I'm more than willing to help out with whichever one you decide to tackle first.'''

Hope this helps :> Professorpineapple 22:56, June 21, 2012 (UTC)Professor

If you're not willing to "let go" of the whole teenage-boy-hunting-down-high-profile-criminal-in-absurdly-violent-fashion, there really isn't much you can do to salvage this story. With everything you've got mashed into this story, the whole plotline is beyond ridiculous, and not even vaguely believeable. The only way you could pull it off is if you were to play off some of the more absurb parts as satire, but even that would require a lot of skill in the wording of your story - more skill than I have, at least.

If you're not willing to take any of my suggestions, I'm not sure what you want me to do for you here. You're obviously pretty content with whatever it is that you're writing about, if you'd just blow off any critique without consideration. Like I said before, if you wanna write for fun, write for fun. Reader count shouldn't matter if you're just having fun - and you can't expect to have many readers unless you put some effort in.

I'm honestly not sure why you'd ask for my help in the first place, if you're just going to disregard everything I said. Not that you have to take everything I say as gospel, but if you have an issue with a suggestion, could you at least let me know why, and not just blow it off? You and I might be seeing this story differently, and I'm not entirely sure where you want it to go, so a little communication would be helpful. You've gotta help me help you :>

As for your character, I've got quite a bit to say about that, but I can't tell if you're willing to put any effort into this story at all. Characterization is easier to change than plot, but it still requires a good amount of effort, and you're going to make quite a few changes if you want him to be relatable. If you're not willing to try to improve, it'd be a waste of time to go over all of that now. But whenever you're ready, just let me know :)

Also; I've only played Read Dead Redemption, and I kind of sucked at it. I was just getting the hang of the controls when my Xbox kicked it XD Is Revolver a sequel to it?

Ah, I see. I'll have to check it out, then, when I get the chance. I'd never heard of the series before someone gave me a copy of Redeption :O

Helping you isn't a bother at all, I actually love helping others with their writing. But giving advice and then being completely ignored is frustrating, and kind of rude.

Good luck with your story - because trust me, kid, you're gonna need it. Professorpineapple 22:24, June 22, 2012 (UTC)Professor

Not cool dude.
Professorpineapple and I got into a little talk. And I gotta say; you've got some cheek to ask her for tips on improving your story, only for you to just turn around and completely disregard any and all points she made. Did you see the length and depth of the stuff she wrote to you? That took freakin' 30 minutes, and you just straight up say "NOPE TOO MUCH WORK FOR ME!"

That's rude and inconsiderate dude. Just sayin'. If you don't want our help, then please for all that is good, decent AND considerate, do not bother us with requests like that. It's apparent that you don't want to change anything on your story and you're being about as stubborn as an ass about it, anyway :\

Don't bother her again unless you're absolutely convinced you need some help. Otherwise that's just rude.

(apologies in advance to the other wikiers, but this honest to god rustled my jimmies.)

Memai 03:02, June 23, 2012 (UTC) ♥


 * No, no need to apologize, Memai.


 * BBF, seriously man. I know by now it may seem like I'm just parroting what they said, but as a patroller, I expect better etiquette than that.


 * I mean heck, I wouldn't even say the problem was about deciding not to take the advice. But the way you shrugged it off was as if you just said "You know what, screw it. Not gonna bother, so I'll just figure something out."


 * If you're going to ask a serious question that actually requires effort and cooperation, you have to take it seriously yourself. So make sure you're 100% ready to listen to other people's advice. Hua Xiong 15:11, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you :) If you're ever ready to write something seriously, feel free to drop me a line.

Good luck with revising your character - to be honest, his personality is so bland that he'll be a really easy fix. One thing to keep in mind: Always know the motivation behind every action. Even if he doesn't take the best course of action for every situation, if you can show the reader why he chose to act the way he does, he'll seem less robotic.

Figured I'd toss that in there, since it's the most basic rule of characterization, but took me years to figure out. Good luck! Professorpineapple 21:55, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, check out my new chapter. It's not done yet but just tell me how it is so far. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 23:46, July 3, 2012 (UTC)

Hey,it may seem weird that I'm leaving a message in this section,but its for something else.My chapter 19 is done in case you want to read it.Also,like you,MichaelDiaz101, and SirLinkalot96 I've started the to do the blog post to start up a conversation.If you get a minute can you check out my blog post? It's Charles' question to you guys or something like that.Its about something I've had on my mind for about a week.Cdc1998 05:25, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, my new chapter is out. Read it, love it, eat it, I don't care haha. Just wanted to let you know. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:22, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah I left a comment on the chapter. Check it out. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 00:56, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

So this is my idea. You can change some things but I hope that the main idea can stay the same. So Michael's coach Tony has entered a tournament. Three of the cliques are fighting in the tourney. Members from G.S. crew, the Preppies, and the Jocks are fighting. Tony was sabotaged and nearly injured (he barely makes it out without being injured) by a member of one of the cliques they don't know who. Michael wants to search all three cliques at once and so he asks C-Money and hopefull if Cdc says yes Charles and all three search the cliques. The evidence they find will be shocking from all sides. They also watch over Tony to make sure he doesn't get injured leading up to his fights by other cliques. What do you think? MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 02:45, July 23, 2012 (UTC)

It is an MMA fight. Think UFC. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 01:14, July 24, 2012 (UTC)

A Quick Question
Hey The ToughGuy,I know you have school & everything but when you're on here whenever you have free time can you respond to me? I have a quick question that deals with your story.What's the setting of it so far where you have it(like the month,time,etc)? Is it the same as you told me last time or different now? I'm just wondering because I was going to have somehting dealing with the weather in my new chapter(I finally finished my other one by the way,I found my labtop and have decided to use that).Cdc1998 (talk) 17:50, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Alright,thanks.Cdc1998 (talk) 23:28, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, the new Future of Greg Ryder chapter is out. Read it and tell me what you think SirLinkalot96 (talk) 20:34, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Hey man, whenever you're on here can you check out my latest blog post? I saw that you already left a comment on it, but I added a message to give everyone I talk to on here a heads up. If you read it can you message me back?Cdc1998 (talk) 23:58, August 21, 2012 (UTC)

You really should stop notifying me about your chapters. I no longer am on this wiki. Kingofawosmeness777 20:51, September 1, 2012 (UTC)

A Small Request
Hey, can you please stop leaving messages on my talk page telling me that one of your chapters is done? They're just clogging up my talk page. Thanks, dude. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 21:00, September 3, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, I have an idea for a chapter in which Michael and C-Money work together. If you are interested. Message me back if you are. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 19:02, September 9, 2012 (UTC)

Michael's girlfriend Nicole and her best friend Bradi come to Bullworth. Bradi developes a crush on C-Money, you can react anyway you want to this. No Bradi is also not a secret agent, just a normal girl. The guys (C-Money, Charles, and Greg) learn that Nicole's humor, and outgoing attitude makes her a perfect match for Michael. The Jocks soon learn about this connection and start to target Nicole and Bradi. Michael and C-Money don't take that too well. Michael and C-Money beat Ted and Damon worse then they've ever beaten them. They soon discover though that Ted and Damon had nothing to do with it. Later they learn that Whitney and Gary was to blame and these events would bring out a dark side of Michael that the guys have never seen before. Also Nicole and Bradi announce that they will move to Bullworth and attend Bullworth Academy. I'll make a page for them later but here's a basic description for them both.

Nicole Borrego: Nicole has black hair and is of Hispanic decent. She's 5'2, has brown eyes and is very fun loving. Though when things get rough she will take things seriously. She's outgoing and funny, just like Michael. Also being very smart. She is a grade above Michael which would put her in C-Money's grade.

Bradi McGuire: Bradi has long blond hair and is of German herritage. She's got long blond hair and blue eyes, she is about 5'6. She is very shy but, like Nicole, is also very good looking. Michael often brags that she makes The Nerds look dumber then Jocks. She is very nice and when she isn't as shy starts to be funny, and joke around. She is in Michael's grade.

MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 01:25, September 12, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah I remember. I won't be catching up I am taking my future wife to a fancy dinner and spending the weekend with her. Sorry for not writing. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 08:38, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Whats up dude? Hey, my lastest Charles' Time at Bullworth chapter is done. Can I get your opinion on it?Cdc1998 (talk) 22:15, October 10, 2012 (UTC) can you check oout my two lat

Whats up man? Hey, whenever you're on here & not busy with your chapters or whatever can you check out my latest blogs?(its two of them: one's a question and the other one's a rant about something that happened to me today. And in the question one you're gonna find some spelling errors, but that was because I was typing real fast because my laptop's battery was going to die)Cdc1998 (talk) 20:02, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, dude. I just finished my latest chapter, if you want to check it out. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:11, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Hey dude, I fixed my chapter, so can I get your opinion if its better? Also I read on your latest blog that you said after you're done wiht your chapters & epilogue, you're taking a break from righting until New Years day. So, here's my question. After you're done, are you still going to be on here, like doing the question blogs, or just don't write until new years day?Cdc1998 (talk) 21:56, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Dude
Whats up dude? Happy belated-birthday. I knew your birthday was yesterday and I would've left you a message on here, but I had no internet access. And besides you were probably out celebrating. But happy belated birthday.Cdc1998 (talk) 20:43, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the suggestion. I will consider it. Thanks, dude SirLinkalot96 (talk) 03:18, December 24, 2012 (UTC)

Hey dude, happy belated new year. First off can't wait for your protologue to come out. Second I'm already up to chapter 38 on my chapters(I didn't have internet again for two weeks, but I've wrote them on wordpads but couldn't put them on here), but I'm going to wait to finish them since they already include C-Money, so I'm going to wait until you get started back on your chapters. Just thought I'd give you a heads up.Cdc1998 (talk) 19:19, January 1, 2013 (UTC)

Hey TTG, I changed my chapter 35. Just thought I'd let you know.Cdc1998 (talk) 10:23, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Both. And I lack the drive to keep writing, as well. :( SirLinkalot96 (talk) 21:52, January 29, 2013 (UTC)

Most likely die. It would be unrealistic if I had him live and come back later. Plus, I can't decide how I'm going to describe Greg's torture without violating the rules. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 00:37, January 30, 2013 (UTC)

Hey, since the Assistant Principal is an important character I thought about making a page for him, but he's your character. So would you want to make the page or should I? We both could contribute to it. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 17:51, February 17, 2013 (UTC)

Hey, where you at dude? MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 21:30, March 2, 2013 (UTC)

Hey here's my idea for this thing going on in my story. So C-Money returns on the same day that the Gym in Old Bullworth Vale that Michael trains MMA at is attacked and graffiti is everywhere. The attackers are hoping that this will cause a war between Michael's friends and the Preppies. In CDC's story this is alse the day that Charles sabotages the day as well. But yeah tensions are rising between the Preppies and the guys. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 22:56, March 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re: Chapter Planning
No, I don't think Greg should tell C-Money, because he's keeping tabs on him, as well. That would be a terrible idea of Greg's to tell one of his best friends that he's been ratting him out haha. How about C-Money figures it all out and just angrily confronts him about it and they get in a fight? Idk SirLinkalot96 (talk) 23:40, March 3, 2013 (UTC)

Nice. Also I just realized this but besides the king of the hill tournament Michael has never had a real fight with the Preppies. I'll start writing later tonight. MichaelDiaz101 (talk) 01:19, March 4, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, about your chapter planning: Why do you have C-Money hate Derek so much still? At the end of your last chapter, when they hang out together for the day, and after that, it seemed like C-Money may be starting to open up to Derek and forgive him. Then in your latest chapter, C-Money screamed at Johnson, saying that he's not his real dad and that they're not related. No offense, but it makes C-Money seem like an ungrateful brat. That's just my opinion, anyway SirLinkalot96 (talk) 11:46, March 4, 2013 (UTC)