User blog comment:SodaCat/Bullworth Nights - Muse: Chapter 8: Rule Breaking/@comment-26358727-20150913212331

I think I say this every chapter, but I really do enjoy Jesse - and the way you write him is so spot-on for the setting. I absolutely love it; I think of all the characters you write, he feels the most real to me. He's very much suited to his environment and I can really imagine him as being a Jock within the canon material. ( :

Of course, the rest of the team is written so in-character, as well. Bless them, haha!

However, I really enjoy the way you've characterized Jesse and Mandy's relationship. Even though they're from the same clique, they're total opposites and they make a really compelling case. It's very cool to read because half of the time you forget that Mandy is a Jock, as well - I really like the way you write Mandy. It comes across as very true to the Mandy in-game, even though we hardly get to know her as much as I would have liked.

You've made me very curious to see how this goes for Jesse, though. With everyone being a Jock, the clash between him and Ted for Mandy's affections are going to make things complicated. I really look forward to seeing how it plays out for them!!