Thread:Cdc1998/@comment-4059927-20160610100540/@comment-4059927-20160614020803

Have you attempted an outline? Just using a combination of what you wish to use and formatting it to better use it in the future for your series. I think from where we are now perhaps Edgar's friends find out about this slick deal that Tad did they (mainly Michael) plan to go after them, whilst Edgar being a passive individual, tries to get them to not bring this to violence and to just let it go.

Also what if the other Preps have developed certified loyalty to Edgar? They consider him a friend, would they disapprove of Tad's scheme? I see it as many avenues that you can take it from there.

I was a shy kid in high school. I had one relationship with a lovely girl named Bailey. It deteriorated from then on. We rushed things extensively far before it would be appropriate to even do so. The pregnancy scare was the last straw. It could be good to forge good standings with many people, men and women, and with women you may just delve deeper and find that feeling you've been harboring within all this time.