User blog comment:MichaelDiaz101/Lets Make this Hurt Chapter 1: In for the Long Run/@comment-26358727-20150725145316

I really like the contrast you've used here between Troy and Andy. I think it really helps to accentuate what you're aiming for in Andy's character. While Troy might be brutishly tough, he's not incredibly intelligent, which is where this scrawny little new kid has him beat. In a fight, strength certainly isn't everything—we see this in the way Andy is able to remain very calm, even calculating, under pressure.

And I think that, to me, is what makes his character so unnerving. You've done really well to capture the lack of 'feeling' in Andy throughout a scene in which he's not only being bullied, but he's being beaten up pretty aggressively, too.

I can't wait to see what else you have in store for him! ( :