User blog comment:TheToughGuy/Creative Writing Assignments: Volume 1/@comment-26358727-20171225192137

These are really great!

I don't know why, but that suicidal Xbox piece really stands out to me. It captures a more light-hearted narrative voice that you don't use as much in your writing and I really enjoy it. You write it very well and I do hope we'll see more light-hearted works from you in the future!

There's an honesty to your work that leaves me feeling some of the pieces are rather autobiographical; putting pieces of yourself and your own experiences is such a powerful device. It evokes a strong emotional response from your readers, which you've most certainly achieved throughout these pieces you've written.

I can't believe how much your writing has improved over the past two years. Seriously, you capture so many different emotions across your work and you make it seem so effortless to switch those voices.

Keep at it, man. You've got really something here! (: