User blog comment:Memai/Why I cannot take your OC seriously./@comment-2109247-20120212201048

Good god Memai, where do I begin?! I have to say that my work was flat-out insipid...So bland... It's a good thing I stopped writing that story and quit the self-inserts for good...

And my new Character is a mess, the page is sloppy... I want to try out that Character sheet, it seems better than a character page.

But let me ask you this...What if the character notices your character, but then treats you like dog-shit and begins to beat the living hell out of you? Could that be added in a story instead of romance?