User blog comment:TheToughGuy/BULLY: THE UNDEAD STORY--Chapter 25/@comment-5385060-20151125110126/@comment-5385060-20151125200515

If there is any particular parts you don't like, point them out. I could offer some suggestions purely from a constructive advice perspective. Usually when I'm offering advice, I never really know where it is wanted or needed. So I just jump in and choose something I feel needs a bit more development.