Thread:WayfinderOwl/@comment-4995321-20151225171936/@comment-5385060-20151226222946

I would remove the comparrisons to other OCs. This is about Sophia only, not them. So far, she seems too perfect. Too talented. She needs some flaws. Something that shows she isn't perfect. Something that comes from her own personality. I'll tell you some of my own character's flaws; Milo - He is so impulsive, he doesn't even consider the consiquences of his actions. Josh - He is easily influenced by other people, and gets into situations he really didn't intend to. Becky - She is too busy fighting her chosen battles, she isn't thinking about what is actually going on around her. Kyla - She is so adamant her life will completely work out the way she plans, she doesn't even consider that it might not happen. I could go on, but I think that makes my point.

These flaws can't just be tacked on. They have to come from who the person is.

Also, Art Freaks isn't in your timeline, so it doesn't really matter what her art skill is. There is no connection to her or my characters, so her skill compared to them is irrelivant.