User talk:MichaelDiaz101

Welcome
Hi, welcome to Bully Fanon Wiki! Thanks for your edit to the User blog:MichaelDiaz10page. Here on Bully Fanon Wiki, you can create a page on your fanfiction! OC pages, stories, and much more! Just read these Rules. Then, you'll be good to go! Any questions, just ask me!

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Dan the Man 1983 (Talk) 06:16, June 12, 2011

In Relpy
There just random arguing, not much of a big deal. ( (  (  (  4th Hale   )  )  )  )  ~  Talk  21:07, June 12, 2011 (UTC)


 * You'll see that alot in wikis, not just this one, anyway welcome. (  (  (  (  4th Hale   )  )  )  )  ~  Talk  21:10, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * To be brief, you came at a time where there's an unresolved issue between Scarly and Dan, and it's been plaguing the wiki for weeks now.
 * Don't let it discourage you, though. Hua Xiong 22:33, June 12, 2011 (UTC)


 * The problems with Scarly and Dan won't be that long in my view. (  (  (  (  4th Hale   )  )  )  )  ~  Talk  23:10, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh no, not at all. There's just a very tense relationship between Dan the Man 1983 and Scarly. Absolutely nothing to do with your blog. If you need help with anything else, just ask me :D SirLinkalot96 (talk) 23:32, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah! I was there for a short while. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:33, June 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * About that--I won't even say the word without exploding into a million Cat pieces-- arguing, much better word, it's fine, it'll be fixed one way or another. Welcome to Bully Fanon Wiki! Where magical little ponies roam the seas. Just kidding. ﻿ Soda  ﻿ Cat  01:40, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, why not? This weekend, cuz I'm still taking finals. I'll start on Friday. What do you think of Greg Ryder? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:57, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

His first chapters are on www.bullygame.wikia.com on my same userpage in the blogs section. I am going to make sure he graduates before this summer ends! He should be halfway done with his junior year by now! But with school, everything's just been so hard, ya know? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:31, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

That sucks. They just want to press you with a ton of work before you set off into the real world. Also, you should give Michael Diaz more of a backstory. Like a police record (You can use Greg's for an example if you want) and his early life before Bullworth Academy. Just some advice :D SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:39, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, there's this cool website where you can make avatars for your fan fic characters. It's called www.tektek.org and that's the website we use to make our characters. It's free and you just save the pictures on your computer and upload it onto here once you're done with it. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:32, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Suggestion
A lot of people create their OC images through www.tektek.org, the dream avatar thing.  Soda  ﻿ Cat☠  01:16, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

No problem. Anything to help someone out. Can't wait to start writing with you! BULLY'S BIGGEST FAN collaberates with me, and you should join our writing team. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:08, June 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * Well I feel like a dip stick... I didn't notice Link told ya 'bout tektek on the comment up there... sorry... ﻿ Soda  ﻿ Cat☠  13:15, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, school just got out for me and Greg Ryder is back in business! How should Michael and Greg meet? I have an idea: How bout Michael's dorm room is next to Greg's and then it can go from there? Or do you think we should use the idea that we did through the comments section on one of your blogs? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 16:18, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

How about they were already next to each other? And then Michael tries to socialize with his neighbors, then Greg answers the door or something like that. You make the first chapter of them meeting, and I'll make another going along the lines of yours. Then the next time we collaborate, I do the chapter, then you do your chapter along the lines of mine. Sound good? That's how me and BULLY'S BIGGEST FAN work (I call him BBF for short) SirLinkalot96 (talk) 23:04, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Just leting you know. Since SirLinkalot96 told you about my story, all I got to say is my new chapter (Chapter 27) is complete. If you want, come and read it. It's good (I think) and long. Glad to have you here as well. -BBF (June 18, 2011; 10:32 PM)

Chapter 28 is complete. -BBF (June 25, 2011; 5:30 PM)

He is about 6 feet tall. Kingofawosmeness777 04:04, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

I would just say that he's about 4 to 5 feet tall. Also, when Greg introduces Mike to C-Money, let C-Money say "My name is Clayton Mason, but call me C-Money". That's how I usually make C-Money introduce himself to other people. -BBF (July 1, 2011; 1:20 PM)

King just reminded me. C-Money is 6 feet tall. Forget the 4 to 5 feet thing. -BBF (July 1, 2011; 2:02 PM)

Chapter 30 is complete. -BBF (July 9, 2011; 1:05 PM)

If you meant by writing a chapter about C-Money showing Mike around the school, I'll do in the next story. I'm still working on the first one (I'm planning to have 40 chapters in my first story). I'll get to that part in my next story, I promise. Also, I don't get what you mean by stingy. -BBF (July 10, 2011; 2:10 PM)

Should I even ask why you want me to do the chapter before you do? -BBF (July 11, 2011; 5:07 PM)

Why don't you do this for an idea? I show you around the school. I befriend you with the Bullies and Greasers as well as get you on good standings (not friends but not enemies) with the Preps. But then we go into a fight against the Jocks all because of what will happen in my final chapters. We fight and almost lose, but we defeated the Jocks. We become good friends after the tour and that would be it. Does it sound like a good idea? -BBF (July 12, 2011; 1:40 PM)

You're welcome. -BBF (July 12, 2011; 1:45 PM)

No, not yet. I already know you have though. -BBF (July 12, 2011; 1:55 PM)

Chapter 31 is complete. -BBF (July 15, 2011; 5:41 PM)

Chapter 32 is complete. -BBF (July 22, 2011; 1:15 PM)

I'm not intrested. Thanks for the offer though. Don't get me wrong. I really like the Red Dead series, but I just like to focus on my story here for right now. -BBF (July 25, 2011; 11:40 AM)

Reply
No, it's Rose(nickname for myrealname) :P Haha, but shoot!  Ro <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> se  Talk 01:15, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 34 is complete. -BBF (August 6, 2011; 5:49 PM)

Riots
It's an uproar due to a few things. Mainly the fatal shooting of a suspect by Metropolitan Police in London.

But local tensions with police, high unemployment and the government cutting money from public services when the money is needed most in public services, the economic crisis, proverty and the widening gap bettween rich and poor are the main reasons they're rioting.

I don't agree with the riots, but with this government, it was inevitable. Dan the Man 1983 03:00, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 35 is complete. -BBF (August 16, 2011; 9:07 PM)

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I'm sad because:

August 16, 1977: Elvis Presley dies in his home in Graceland.


 * ( <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> Ro <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> se  Talk 22:08, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Since Michael arrives at Bullworth during the beginning of the new school year, I'm write the chapter where they meet on the next book. Don't you worry, I'll write it, just not now okay. I just want to do my stories perfectly instead of making it into a complete mess. Do you understand? I won't forget it at all. Trust me. -BBF (August 17, 2011; 6:18 PM)


 * Trust me, by glory, he does. But as a respectful fan, I ain't none too bright on that day. <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> Ro <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> se  Talk 00:02, August 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Man, I missed you. Oh well, I'm not really in a muffin story-telling mood. Or any mood, really. <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> Ro <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> se  Talk 02:30, August 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yeah, but not completely. Eh, it doesn't matter anymore. Happy belated birthday to him, then. <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> Ro <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> se  Talk 03:18, August 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm deeply sorry for your loss. Nothing that matters really. Thanks for your concern, though :) <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> Ro <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> se  Talk 05:22, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

You thought I was a Man? ZaKrasniyStar 06:06, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I wasn't mad or anything...ZaKrasniyStar 00:52, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re
Ehm... I didn't eat any bread today! HA! <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> Ro <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> se  Talk 20:11, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 36 is complete. -BBF (August 23, 2011; 7:58 PM)

It's all goodZaKrasniyStar 03:52, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

No, we made a decision a long time ago that if we choose OC's as a featured article, it will create jealousy and tension between users. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 19:40, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Yep! Exactly, so we figured to use canon articles for featured articles. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 21:08, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I just finished the latest Greg Ryder chapter, if you want to read it. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 22:17, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

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Meh, I don't see why not. As long as its not something insulting other opinions, or just plain spam (Since there have been IPs that do that -_-") Also, technically, since you're not staff you can't delete player opinions. <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> Ro <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> se  Talk 02:27, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Chapter 37 is complete. -BBF (September 14, 2011; 5:46 PM)

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Because the ones that post in the Players Opinions dont seem to mean any harm, they're just posting their opinons. And since it's players, the anons are technically players too. If it were User opinons, it'd be different :) <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> Ro <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> se  Talk 02:23, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Why thank you for calling me intelligent, Michael, it means a lot. 67.85.200.187 02:28, September 28, 2011 (UTC)Zak

OK Michael, I will read them and nice to meet you :) -- Ilan xd 05:06, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, I have a question. Do you want to join BBF (Bully's Biggest Fan) and my writing team and we can write together and include each other's OC's in our stories and what not? Get back to me as soon as you get this message. Thanks :D SirLinkalot96 (talk) 18:00, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay. I must have forgot haha. But I mean officially. Like Michael joins C-Money and Greg's group of friends and starts hanging out with them and stuff. Like a central or main character. Kinda like C-Money is in my stories. Btw, what does your character look like and what clothes does he wear? I'll make an avatar for him. Different outfits and stuff, ya know? I don't mind doing it. They're pretty easy to make. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 00:56, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Man
Hey Michael, can you help me build the GTA Fanon wiki? -- Ilan xd 14:38, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I read Part 4. I believe I left a comment at the blog post. You didn't have to remind me about it. -BBF (October 18, 2011; 5:45 PM)

Sure, that'd be great. We could use a fresh start. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 03:15, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Greg and Michael
So, the next chapter I'm gonna write will have Michael in it. What do you want to happen? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 04:57, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, okay. Sounds good. How bout Michael gets into a fight with the jocks and loses the fight. But Greg is very impressed with how well Michael did his first time up against the jocks, so that's how they meet. Is that okay? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 22:19, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

How bout a fair fight? That'd be better than a prank. So, Michael and Greg both challenge them to a fair fight in The Hole. Sound good? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:50, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, check out my new chapter. Read it and then you decide what happens next between Michael and Greg, ok? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 03:21, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter's finished. Check it out. I hope you like it! SirLinkalot96 (talk) 04:44, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Michael's bio page
Hey, I want to help you set up your character's biography page better. I made an avatar for him on tektek.org if you want to see it. I made him in his school uniform. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 00:06, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, that seems like a good idea. -BBF (January 8, 2012; 2:07 PM)

Chapter 3 is complete. -BBF (January 24, 2012; 7:46 PM)

I just started the chapter where our characters first meet. Check it out sometime. I'll finish it tomorrow. -BBF (February 04, 2012; 8:40 PM)

I like it! You can write it, if you'd like. I have to type a lab report for school today, so when I'm done, I won't be in the writing mood, haha XD SirLinkalot96 (talk) 16:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

New chapter
In case you didn't read it, I have a new chapter out. Hua Xiong 16:52, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Hahahaha I'm from Boston, so I have to root for the Patriots, otherwise I'll get stabbed or something haha. It's gonna be a close game. I think the Pats could win if they get their shit together and Brady doesn't suck like he did the last couple games he was in, otherwise the Giants are gonna be champs. That's my opinion, btw. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 19:56, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 11 is complete. -BBF (March 18, 2012; 5:31 PM)

Chapter 12 is complete. -BBF (April 01, 2012; 4:48 PM)

If you get a minute can you read this:
Hey,I'm writing a blog and I was talking to Bully's Biggest Fan on if he had any suggestions or tips,and he said if I wanted any helpful hints or stuff to ask you,SirLinkalot96, and Memai,so if you get a minute do you think you can read my blog to give me some feedback on if I need to improve anything? The blog is "the warriors come to bullworth"Cdc1998 21:26, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Page deletion
Consider it done. If you want to resurrect it at any point, let me know. Hua Xiong 21:21, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 18 is complete. -BBF (May 13, 2012; 5:09 PM)

With your permission
Hey Mike, I have been thinking about this for a while. Do you mind if I add Whitney into my next chapter? If you don't want me to, I can understand. -BBF (May 15, 2012; 6:24 PM)

How our characters meet:
Hey michael,I did like how our characters meet from your p.o.v. I was laughing when you wrote the "fucking again" part.Cdc1998 02:55, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

ha,I really didn't notice that until you said itCdc1998 03:05, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Sounds good man,just tell me when you want to start planning the chapter.I probably wouldn't know what to do though,but how you brought up a party was good.(I've never had to host a party for people so I really wouldn't know what to do).But,just tell me some ideas & when you wanna start planning.Cdc1998 03:28, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

Okay man.Cdc1998 03:43, May 29, 2012 (UTC)

I think I'll leave the Whitney page up to you, Mike. Thanks for the offer anyway. -BBF (May 31, 2012; 12:01 PM)

Chapter 21 is complete. -BBF (June 10, 2012; 6:46 PM)

Hey Michael,thanks for what you said i should try to do with the chick I like.I'm going to try it when/if I see her(I hope I run into her just to get an answer.If she turns me down,then I can take rejection,but I hope I can still be friends & it doesn't ruin it.If she doen't turn me down & wants to hang out,then I'll do some of the stuff you said would be advisable).I was talking to my friend Brian Zarate on facebook and was telling him how the chick never responded and he said I should try to do some of the stuff you said(even though I didn't mention it).Ironic right?Cdc1998 00:36, June 15, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 22 is complete. -BBF (June 18, 2012; 12:28 PM)

Hey Michael,the party chapter is done,can i get your opinion on it?Cdc1998 20:58, June 22, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 23 is complete. -BBF (June 25, 2012; 5:23 PM)

Poke
Michael. Michael. Michael. Michael. Michael.

Hi.

<font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> Ro <font size= "+2" face="Gabriola"> se   18:42, June 29, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 24 is complete. -BBF (July 3, 2012; 1:13 PM)

Chapter 25 is complete. -BBF (July 8, 2012; 6:45 PM)

Thats sounds good, so yeah, we can do that. You're right it would make chapters involving both of us easier. Cdc1998 18:09, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Michael, thats all good what you wrote, but I just have one thing to say. Its not that important,but my character already has a tv in his room. Like they layout is he has a tv, radio, labtop on a desk, a duffell bag, some suitcases, and a fan. Its not important but I just wanted to tell you. Cdc1998 19:43, July 13, 2012 (UTC)

Dude I am so sorry I didn't mean to come off being rude.Really I didn't know what I was saying.I'm sorry for being rude,my apologies.Cdc1998 02:02, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

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Hey, man. Take it easy. I'll talk to him about it. I'll read the comments you both made and try to see what happened. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:09, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

And by 'take it easy' I'm meaning it in a friendly way, like to a friend, not the mean 'take it easy' Just so you don't take it the wrong way or something, sorry haha SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:10, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

You did the right thing. I'm proud of you, man. I gave him a warning, since he most likely didn't mean for it to sound rude. Just remember, if no admin/b-crat is online, just tell Sannse at www.community.wikia.com and she will handle it for you. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:19, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Oh yeah, my new chapter is out, if you're interested. It has Michael in it, and I want you to make sure if you think it's okay. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:21, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks a lot, man. I really appreciate it. I do. I will have fun at camp! I hope you and your fiance are doing fantastic, and that you keep writing good fanfic on the way. I always read the new Michael Diaz chapter every time you release one. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:28, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 26 is complete. -TheToughGuy (July 15, 2012; 4:04 PM)

Sure.What do you got in mind? By the wya the chapter where Michael moves in is going to be my next chapter.Cdc1998 00:53, July 18, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 27 is complete. -TheToughGuy (July 22, 2012; 8:52 PM)

What kind of tornament are you talking about? A boxing or another king of the hill or what? -TheToughGuy (July 23, 2012; 8:11 PM)

To tell you the truth, I don't think the G.S. Crew would do a thing like that. It does seem like a interesting idea though. I think we should go for it, but the G.S. Crew thing might have to change. Maybe somebody from the crew posing as a non-clique student. How bout that? -TheToughGuy (July 24, 2012; 10:24 AM)

Chapter 28 is complete. -TTG (July 29, 2012; 4:39 PM)

Chapter 29 is complete. -TTG (August 05, 2012; 3:40 PM)

Hey Michael(its a 'hi' type of hey),I have a quick question for you. I saw that you left a message on SirLinkalot96's talk page about asking if you could use his character in your "Michael's future life" type of story(I only saw it because I was going to ask him some questions about his character). If I start doing that(if I do I would start on it after my character's time at Bullworth),could I include Michael in my story?Cdc1998 (talk) 04:48, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah I'm going to continue writing about Charles' time in high school .I'll either start the chapters about charles' years after bullworth after I'm done with the high school years, halfway done, or just write them along with charles high schools years,which it'll probably be that.Cdc1998 (talk) 05:14, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Sure, you could use Greg in your future chapters. How bout when Greg meets Michael, Michael decides to help him out by having him stay at Michael's house (Greg is homeless) and he offers him a job? And you make that chapter about Michael and Greg catching up? Is that cool? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 15:09, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, sounds good to me. Let me know when you're gonna put Greg in the chapter SirLinkalot96 (talk) 17:43, August 8, 2012 (UTC)

How bout Greg is sitting on a sidewalk in Old Bullworth Vale, begging for spare change (As he is homeless) and Michael sees him, thinking he looks familiar. Walking up to him, and he has a conversation with Greg. They remember each other and Michael hangs out with him for the rest of the day, catching up. You can do whatever, but when Greg explains his current circumstances, just make sure it follows the way I put it in my story. Is that cool? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:03, August 9, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, is it okay if Greg has a thing with Lisa? I have an idea for the next chapter for them both. What's her personality like? And tell me things she's interested in, since Michael has known her longer than Greg has. You know? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:34, August 10, 2012 (UTC)

Hey Michael, I thought of an idea for one of my future chapters where Charles meets Michael again and I want to get your opinion on it. Here's something I thought of. Charles is walking around Old Bullworth Vale(just to visit it again), and Michael sees him while walking, but Charles doesn't notice him. While walking he sees some Bullworth students and them being teenagers thinking they can do whatever start making fun of Charles because he's become a famous guy(he ends up working for a company that outfits casino's out in vegas & liberty city, and they get cuts from the casino profits. He's an excutive.). But Charles says that he doesn't have to take any shit from teenagers like them and says that he went to Bullworth, and then says more stuff and they walk away, but doesn't notice he drops his buisness card. Michael then goes & picks it up and sees that the company's building is in Liberty City, so the next day Michael decides to go pay Charles a visit. When he gets to Charles office he sees Charles arguing with someone on the phone(its on speaker phone so Michael can hear the conversation. Its also similar to the argument between Joe Pesci & Robert De Niro in Casino,so I think I'm going to use a quote) When its over Michael says something sarcastic like Charles has the same attitude he did when they were teenagers, and Charles replies that Michael still has the same sarcasm. They then start catching up and Michael says that Charles has changed. Charles replies with "Yeah.I'm exactly your height and I changed my hairstlye & grew some facal hair. So? You've changed too." then they start talking again and Charles says something like he may be tough & exactly his height,but Michael could still kick his ass because he's seen one of his fights. Then you can think of some stuff. Does that sound like a good chapter,I just want your opinion. Also can you tell me if you'd like something changed?Cdc1998 (talk) 05:46, August 10, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and I thought of a chapter dealing with Charles & Michael as the black arrow. It deals with a bank robbery by guys disguised as pest control, and the black arrow is called in by the police to catch the criminals.When he gets there he sees them inside and decides to go in from some way(what do you think would be good?). When he gets in he fights 4 of the guys(there's 5 but the main guy tells them to take care of him). Michael defeats them and then decides to chase after the main guy(who Michael shoots but he has a kevlar vest on). Michael chases after him and the guy takes off his pest control mask, revealing he is Charles. When Michael sees its Charles he tries to convince him to just give up,but Charles won't and says the only way he'll go out is in handcuffs or a body bag, and challenges Michael to a fight. Charles ends up losing and Michael then interrogate shim asking why he would rob a bank since he's already rich, and Charles says he did it for the rush because his life's been boring since he got a job for the company he works at because all the other executives,vice president, and president treat him like shit even though he's the one that comes up with all the ideas for the company, and the money was going to the company for all the other executives,vice president, and president of the company so he wanted to make sure they didn't get it. Michael then asks him to stop this life of crime because its just going to land him in jail. Charles then says he won't and Michael betas him until he says he will(he's in his black arrow gear the whole time by the way). Michael(since he & Charles are friends he lets him go). Does that sound good? You don't have to do these if you don't want to but I just want your opinion. But if you do would you like to change anything?Cdc1998 (talk) 04:48, August 10, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and by the way,your future chapters & other chapters are real good,just thought I'd say that.Can't wait for the next chapter you said you have in planning.Cdc1998 (talk) 05:46, August 10, 2012 (UTC)

That sounds like a good idea,I'll do that. I'll start on my characters first future chapter now and probably finish it tomorrow if I'm not busy, and then write the chapter leading up to the robbery.Cdc1998 (talk) 06:31, August 10, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, man, thanks for the summary. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 12:50, August 10, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, man. You can start your chapter before me if you want. I don't know what you've got planned so I can't really start it from Greg's perspective as security guard, you know? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 17:25, August 10, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 30 is complete. -TTG (August 12, 2012; 3:50 PM)

I just read it, thats a good chapter. Would you mind if I did a chapter from my character's pov on it?Cdc1998 (talk) 20:00, August 14, 2012 (UTC)

Also have you seen the trailer for GTA V? I sorta got the pest control part from that.Cdc1998 (talk) 20:03, August 14, 2012 (UTC)

I'll start on it later today. I have to go out to eat with my family.Cdc1998 (talk) 20:39, August 14, 2012 (UTC)

Hey Michael, whenever you're not busy can you message me back? I added some stuff to the robbery from my characters pov about the robbery, and it involves sharks( because I'm in florida. I just thought of it). Also for one of my character's fear thats revealed in the chaper I took from an actual fear of mine: fear of sharks.( but I'm just afraid of great whites because they're one of themost sharks to attack unprovoked, they can get huge, they have razor sharp teeth, and they have a thing in their brain that can sense if you're alive or not.) But can I get your opinion on what I added?Cdc1998 (talk) 21:55, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Thats a god idea. Also I though of an idea for my next chapter, that I want to get your opinion on. Right after the bank robbery Charles goes to the venice-tripolar inc headquarters and looks for Aaron & Danny to tell them about how the robbery went, and when he finds them he tells them that someone must have set him up and called the cops, because otherwise they would have got away. he then asks them about where the executives& them were and they say they were all at meetings, except Eddie. They then are walking by his office and see Eddie's cellphone, and they check his call history and see his last call was to the dispatch. They then come up with the conclusion that Eddie betrayed them and search all over the building, but they don't find him. They then go to their offices and when Charles walks in his Eddie hits him from behind( because he's hiding behind the door), locks the door, and aims a pistol at Charles. Charles asks him why he betrayed him and he explains, and then as an extra nte he reveals what he knows about the murders at Queen Industries and Charles says that Eddie won't get away with it. Eddie then shts the glass in Charles office and shoots him out his window, but he doesn't fall out and hangs on for dear life. Eddie(who has a parachute) Charles then dials Michael to ask him for help. Some time later Charles loses his grip, but hears his door kicked and as he is about to fall is pulled up, by Michael. Then Michael says something sarcastic about the situation and tells him about what Eddie did.(its going to include what you said). They then come up with a plan to catch Eddie. Does that sound good, do you think anything needs changed? I just want your opinion.

Also sorry about the late responce, I've been gone for like 4 hours. I first went out to eat with my mom, sister, and cousin at this place called crusin cafe( where the waitresses where really shot-shorts to get good tips. And my mom, sister, and cousin danced to call me maybe.), and then went shopping. Also while driving I saw a guy in a hazmat suit going through a person's car, so that was weird. Then I thought we were going back to the hotel, but we end up going to a tiki bar. Those were the worst moments of my life, well so far. My mom & sister kept taking shots, and dancing to weird songs( which they usually try to embarres me by dancing and pointing to me), and then when they were dancing to a certain song started dancing on eachother( including my cousin), and were being idoits. I only played pool there, and it sucked because everone else was drinking(I wasn't, I just drank a coke, which was on the house because the waitress felt sorry for me because I had to deal with them, and because I'm 14), playing beer pong, and dancing, so I had to play by myself. As you can see, the past 4 hours have been hell for me.Cdc1998 (talk) 03:36, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks man, I do plan on moving somewhere after I graduate, probably out to the west coast, like California or some place. Also how you said you are the beer pong champion, you could have easilly beat these people playing beer pong. I don't even think they made one ball in a cup. Also do you think anything should be changed about my ideas, to make it more interesting? Also good luck on your fightCdc1998 (talk) 13:39, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Check out My Question To You All: No. 06 when you get the chance. -TTG (August 20, 2012; 5:30 PM)

Hey man, whenever you're not busy and on here can you check out my recent blog post? I already saw that you commented on it, but I left a message to give everyone I talk to n here( basically you, Link, TTG, etc) a heads up. If you read it can you message me back? I would've sent you guys messages but I was busy at the moment. By the way can't wait for your next chapter.Cdc1998 (talk) 23:58, August 21, 2012 (UTC)

Your Opinion
Hey Michael, can I get you opinion on some ideas I thought of to add to my chapter, and then maybe the next chapter? But first I have a question. Remember when you said Eddie knows something about the murders? What do you think he should know? Know who did it?, Why it happened?, or something like that? But back to my story Eddie reveals to Charles what he knws, because he's going to try to kill him, and then he says he's going to try to frame the murders on Jimmy Queen, get the police to turn on Black Arrow, and then try to arrest black arow because he's a vigilante. Then he shots Charles out the window, Charles hangs on for dear life, calls Michael to help him(because when he gets shot one of his arms gets glass through it, so he's weak for a moment, or something. Then remember what I wrote in a message before dealing with the chapter? Basically all that happens and they come up with a plan, but then Charles tells them they have to go get Jimmy because of what Eddie plans on doing. When they get to Queen Industries they see Jimmy getting arrested, and try to stop it, but they can't because of the cps being assholes. Then in maybe my next Chapter somehow Charles finds out Michael is Blark Arrow and then when Eddie tries to find out who Black Arrow is(he has some suspects, mostly Charles or Michael, but also other people) Charles says he's Black Arrow to take the heat away from Black Arrow, to get the police to stop trying to find him, and to get Michael a chance to figure out why all this is happening. Does that sound good, or do you think something should change? You don't have to use this in your chapters but if you do, I just want to get you opinion on it.Cdc1998 (talk) 19:42, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Also I thought of some dialogue for Charles & Michael's conversation. Charles calls Michael and tells him to look out of his office's window to see where Charles is to go help him. Then Michale says smething sarcastic about Charles hanging, and jokes thta he'll just let him hang all day, but then Charles says that if he dies he'll come back as a ghost and just annoy him for the rest of his life, and then Michael says he'll be over. When michael gets Charles he says something sarcastic again and then Charles tells him what happened.Cdc1998 (talk) 19:42, August 25, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 31 is complete. -TTG (August 26, 2012; 3:54 PM)

Thats a good idea, we can do that. ALso you can go ahead and start without me, I'll be busy and probably won't be able to start on it until friday or saturday.Cdc1998 (talk) 23:55, August 29, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 32 is complete. -TTG (September 03, 2012; 4:10 PM)

Just a quick question, I saw that in one of your Michael's Fute Life chapters that someone askedMichael to meet him on the beach in hove beach and he used a voice changer & wore dark clothing. Are you going to have the person be revealed in a later chapter?Cdc1998 (talk) 23:25, September 9, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 33 is complete. By the way, what do you have in mind for a chapter where Michael and C-Money works together. I got your message yesterday, so what's your idea? -TTG (September 11, 2012; 7:09 PM)

I'll go with it. But I might make it to where C-Money ain't really interested in her. I already got something planned for Chapter 34. You think it would be alright if I did it for Chapter 35? I don't want you to think that I'm trying to push away the idea, I'm just one of those who plans ahead most of the time? -TTG (September 12, 2012; 8:08 PM)

It's alright, I guess. Things have been pretty hectic these past couple weeks, you know? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:58, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Life wise. Three of my friends got arrested for something me and one of them did together completely hammered. He smashed my best friend's bitch landlady's car windshield with a golf club while I poured Pepto Bizmol all over her car (I later found out the Pepto ate away at the paint. Last Saturday night, they lit off a firework near her apartment balcony and they got arrested by cops who were waiting there for them. They have to go to court and everything. My friends kept their mouths shut about the whole Pepto incident. But it was funny as shit, and it was so worth it! So much adrenaline, let me tell ya, hahaha. I know that's really bad, but it was sooooo funny SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:16, September 16, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 34 is complete. -TTG (September 18, 2012; 6:47 PM)

Hey, I'm going to do the idea that you send me on September 12. If you don't remember it, check out the very last message that you wrote on my Usertalk page. -TTG (September 21, 2012; 7:40 PM)

Whats up dude? I've been fine, just busy with school and all. I think I have an F in physical science and in music I went from an A to a C in a week. I don't understand why, because I'm ususally a music guru, haha. Oh, and I have homecoming next week on saturday, but that salso the day I think my cousins want me to go to a haunted house with them. Its sponsored by WEBN, my city's local station, and people say that that haunted house scares the shit out of people. So, I don't know which I'm going to go to, because if I went to homecoming I'd have no date, since most chicks are already taken.And this saturday I'm going on a hay ride thing with my cousins, its for my Aunts church or something. We usually go through a corn maze and once we got lost and had no flashlight & my phone died. But still, I don't know if I'm going to homecoming or not. Oh, and I'm friends with most juinors & seinors now because I got lunch with them, even though I'm a freshman. I'm friends with more juinors & seinors than sophmores & freshman, but I can only remember a few of the seinors' names. So thats what I've been up to, what have you been up to man?Cdc1998 (talk) 21:24, September 25, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I saw that game. And what sucks is I got fantasy football homework and green bay's my defense! I was salty. Well I hope your wedding's cming along good. And congrats on being an administrator dude! Oh, and do you think I should go to my homecoming or not? I don't know if I'm going to go.Cdc1998 (talk) 21:01, September 28, 2012 (UTC)

Whats up dude? How've you been? Been busy with work & planning your wedding? I just thought I'd catch up with you because the wiki's been semi-dead again(welll except for you, me, Link, TTG, Hua Xiong, and people who edit the character quotes) and I have some free time on my hands from school & a few other things.Cdc1998 (talk) 20:58, October 9, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 37 is complete. -TTG (October 09, 2012; 8:06 PM)

Yeah I didn't go to homecoming. Nobody would sell me a ticket, and reall I think I should have went if they would have sold me because my saturday night was boring. Other then that I've been fine. I'm definitly going to prom though, maybe I'll meet some chicks there. And since people still consider me 'new' even though its been 2 months thats another reason I didn't go. Also I remember in an old message you told me that at your homecoming you were doing stuff against the law? What were you doing, dinking or stuff like that(if you don't want to tell you don't have to). And the seinors & juinors keep offering me weed, so my times at high-school have been interesting(I havent took any though). I bought Shutter Island today and I'm going to watch it later. Are the fallout games good? I've never played them. Oh and from veesdropping on someone I heard that the high-schhol next to mine has been jusping students from my high-school because they htink thye're all cool because they have had alot of fights(and thats the same reason they were banned from their homecoming, karma its a bitch, haha). At least you got some better hours man, that must be good. And I've been bringing my grade up in physical science, I'm up to a C or B now.Cdc1998 (talk) 21:53, October 10, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, man. I just finished my latest chapter, if you want to check it out. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:09, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 39 is complete. -TTG (October 21, 2012; 5:47 PM)

Quick question
Hey, dude. I have a question I was wondering if you could answer, since you live in Seattle: Is there still a good local music scene there? Like grunge in the late 80's and early 90's? Although, I know not as influential as back then of course, but is there? And if there is, what kind of music is there? Do you see any shows of local bands playing there? Just curious. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:34, October 27, 2012 (UTC)

Chapter 41 is complete. -TTG (November 12, 2012; 4:41 PM)

Michael, what up? How've you been? I have a quick question. Has washington changed at all since Marijuana was made legal?Cdc1998 (talk) 20:53, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

My Epilogue is complete. -TTG (December 09, 2012; 4:51 PM)

Reply: Your Earlier Work
That's what everyone keeps telling me! I've been trying to veer off my course of writing fan fic and start writing original stuff, you know? That's why I haven't been writing lately. Thanks for the support, man. Btw, did you see my latest Greg Ryder Future chapter? It's a prequel, but it's not finished yet. You can check it out if you'd like SirLinkalot96 (talk) 20:43, December 18, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, Soda, and this user KateHarrington were the people who first started the Bully fan fic and made it into what Bully Fanon Wiki is today. Bully fanon is my first and only fanfic. I don't know why, but I just find writing Bully fanfic so much more enjoyable than Red Dead fan fic or Call of Duty fan fic, probably because I'm a teenager, who goes through typical adolescent struggles that everyone goes through, and a lot of the characters in the game go through, which makes it easy for me to relate. You're right, it's a very amazing underrated game. Bully's the best :) SirLinkalot96 (talk) 00:14, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Walking Dead got game of the year. That game was just breathtakingly spectacular! SirLinkalot96 (talk) 11:48, December 19, 2012 (UTC)

Hey Bro
Michael, what's up. How have you been? Sorry I havent been on Ias busy with exams, christmas shopping, and I didn't have internet for two weeks. Hey I thought of some chapters for my later chapters(BTW I've been working on chapter's while I've been gone but haven't typed them on here. I'll add them on later this week. But I want to get your opinion on my later chapters, which will probably be set around the end of  Charles & Michael's juinor year and C-Money & Greg's seinor year. Okay so here are a few. Overall The G.S. Crew have brought hell on Bullworth and here's what happens towards the end.

They burn the gym and try to blame it on Charles, but there are jocks trapped inside ,so charles, not being completely evil, goes and saves the jocks.

Charles makes an attack againbst Gary and arrest him, but he later escapes(it's based off of the judgement day and oddeysous missions from black ops 2. I did by it, and I liked it)

Whitney does something and everyone starts calling charles crazy because he wants revenge against Gary(he will do something that pushes Charles over the limit in a later chapter)

Whitney is finally defeated by Michael and Michael, C-Money, and Greg give up on Charles

Chaos erupts upon bullworth and gary plans to escape bullyworth via a plane, Charles goes after gary but his cra is hit by an rpg from a g.s. crew member, but he is saved by michael. Gary calls Charles and reveals he has a bomb and if detonated, will blow up the academy, so he has to make the decision of saving a city that hates him or going after gary, he chooses gary but tells michael to go detonate the bomb. charles finds gary, blows up his plane, and beats him to a pulp, sees the bomb go off, but it's over the harbor. Michael calls charles and asks was it worth it but charles hangs up and walks away. But unknown to him he was being watched by a sniper.

Does that sound good. Do you think I need to chnage anything? I'm asking you because you make some good chapters.Cdc1998 (talk) 04:43, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Hey Michael, I changed my chapter 35, just thought I'd give you a heads up.Cdc1998 (talk) 10:22, January 2, 2013 (UTC)

Chapter 1 is complete. -TTG (January 10, 2013; 10:37 PM)

Chapter 3 is complete. -TTG (January 20, 2013; 4:58 PM)

Hey bro sorry I havent been on I didn't have an internet connection. Also I had the flu. I just got your message. I'm actually in my keyboarding class right now so I got access. So, whats the idea you got?Cdc1998 (talk) 15:14, January 22, 2013 (UTC)

Dude, PRG left this disturbing and really fucked up message on my talk page. You should check it out. I don't know whether I should block her or not. Message me back ASAP SirLinkalot96 (talk) 11:27, January 23, 2013 (UTC)

I blocked her for a week. If she doesn't calm down by then, we'll have to probably have to extend the block. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 20:44, January 23, 2013 (UTC)

I agree. Let's just wait for the block to expire and if she continues to act up, then it's time for a permaban. When she does this, I feel like it just scares people away, including myself! haha SirLinkalot96 (talk) 11:41, January 24, 2013 (UTC)

Hey man its Cdc1998. I'm in my typing class but have to leave in a few minutes so I didn't log in. That sounds liek a good chapter. Just tell me when you wanna start it.-Cdc1998

Hey Michael I did do a character page, so if you want to check it out you can. BTW I'm working on the chapter diea you had for my current chapter. Also I have an idea for the chapter after that. So the jocks spraypaint Charles' car which causes him to fix it for $1,000, so he wants revenge. Michael tells him the big game for this season is comming up and Michael says he should get revenge there. Charles can't figure out an idea, so he scheldules a meeting with hopkins and he tells him what he did. So Charles does stuff similar and he costs the jocks the game, and they want to destroy him. So the enitre football team takes on Charles while the other jocks are blocking Michael, C-Money, and Greg from helping. Does that sound good? Do you think anything needs changed?Cdc1998 (talk) 15:04, January 31, 2013 (UTC)

Hey dude how've you been? This deals with that fight club non-canon story you wrote. First are you going to have a sequel to Ted & Charles, and one fight I'd like to see is Edgar vs Damon.Cdc1998 (talk) 15:26, February 5, 2013 (UTC)

It's only my home copmputer. Remember WAY back when I said I could log in but couldn't edit anything because it would load but nothing would pop up? That's whats wrong with it still. It works but I havent gotten it fixed yet. I'm at school right now so I get on here whenever I can :). How's work been man? Stressful?Cdc1998 (talk) 15:33, February 6, 2013 (UTC)

Well at least you didn't get the flu, unlike me. Thanks to me getting the flu I'm down to a F in math because of the days I've missed when ICdc1998 (talk) 15:13, February 7, 2013 (UTC) had it a few weeks ago. I've even made up all my work and it still hasn't changed :(. Anything new been happening with you?

Happy Birthday
Happy birthday Michael :D <font size= "+2" face="Century Gothic"> Ro <font size= "+2" face="Century Gothic"> se  02:53, February 13, 2013 (UTC)

Happy birthday, Michael! This bong rip is for you, buddy! haha jk I wish SirLinkalot96 (talk) 03:37, February 13, 2013 (UTC)


 * meh thats fine, I just take pride in knowing I age 11 days earlier than you :p Would've messaged you on dA but I figure you'd check here first <font size= "+2" face="Century Gothic"> Ro <font size= "+2" face="Century Gothic"> se  04:08, February 13, 2013 (UTC)
 * I AM NOT TEN, JESUS CHRIST. <font size= "+2" face="Century Gothic"> Ro <font size= "+2" face="Century Gothic"> se  22:41, February 13, 2013 (UTC)


 * Sure man what sthe idea. BTW Happy Belated Birthday. Sorry I couldn't tell you on you bday. Also for my chapter there's goign to be a twist at the end, just thought I'd let you know. Its for the big game chapter.Cdc1998 (talk) 15:32, February 15, 2013 (UTC)

Just a question
"She seems really f*cking messed up for lack of a better word" - That is charming! I have the same illness as her, does that make me fucked up too? Messi1983 (talk) 10:00, February 16, 2013 (UTC)

I made this
Hey, dude. I just made this avatar for Jack Ludwig's character page. I didn't put it on there yet. Do you want to use it for his page? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 22:02, February 16, 2013 (UTC)

Most likely, yeah. It's a tattoo of a red Chinese dragon covering his chest and back (sorta going around his upper body) Glad you like it, man SirLinkalot96 (talk) 03:31, February 17, 2013 (UTC)

What's Michael's hair color/ hairstyle, and his eye color? I'm making an avatar for him SirLinkalot96 (talk) 04:03, February 17, 2013 (UTC)

Hey, I made these for Michael. Do you like them? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 09:33, February 17, 2013 (UTC)



Here's the other one. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 09:34, February 17, 2013 (UTC)

To tell you the truth, I never made any character pages for any characters that I had in my stories so far. I don't really see me making the page anytime soon. You can make it though if you want. Plus, if you make his picture from that website, I picture him with black hair and brown eyes, like C-Money. But man, don't make him look like C-Money. And he's also hispantic if you remember. Hope I'm not dictating what for you to do. -TTG (February 17, 2013; 6:25 PM EST)

Hell yeah, I remember those! I need to start back up on those. It was my pleasure working on the avatars :D SirLinkalot96 (talk) 23:26, February 18, 2013 (UTC)

That's a good idea! I'll get started soon. Give me the details on Greg's situation and what the detective should say do to him. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 23:35, February 18, 2013 (UTC)

Sure dude I like the idea. Ironically it deals with homecomming since my homecomming for my semester is this saturday, also thats my birthday. BTW I say that you started back up on your futur elife chapters again. Do you think I should start back on them again? ALso, this deals with the juinor year part, what's Jimmy Queen's opinion on Charles?Cdc1998 (talk) 15:08, February 19, 2013 (UTC)

Greg was in the military, so he has some muscular physique to him. But since he started using drugs, he probably looks a little more skinnier than usual. He is about 6'1 SirLinkalot96 (talk) 16:39, February 19, 2013 (UTC)

Yes, he does suffer from it. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 19:35, February 22, 2013 (UTC)

Whitney Fordman
What do you think?

SirLinkalot96 (talk) 20:41, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Still in planning stages. I'm planning of making a story arc for Vice Principal Johnson. I'm thinking of having Johnson blackmail Greg into giving information of whatever illegal is going on with his friends, or he will go to prison for possession of marajuana, and intention of selling it on campus (not true, but he uses it as leverage to get what he wants) Greg reluctantly agrees but swears as soon as he finds a way out, he's gonna take it. In the meantime, he is forced to keep tabs on Michael, Charles, and C-Money by Vice Principal Johnson. At a later point, Greg is forced to tell on Michael, C-Money, and Charles for something illegal they're doing and all three get arrested. You can decide what they get arrested for. At this point, Greg wants out, and tells the Vice Principal that he didn't want his friends getting arrested, so he's out. Greg then finds some dirt on Vice Principal Johnson and he uses it as leverage. Is this a good idea? Btw, do you want me to put the Whitney Fordman pics on his character page? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 21:11, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Sounds like we have a plan. I'll work on it later tonight. I'll add the pics to Whitney's page right now. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 21:25, February 24, 2013 (UTC)

Ryan Irvin
Sorry for bugging you with these. But here's Ryan Irvin. I've wondered why you stopped using him in your story. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:46, February 25, 2013 (UTC)

I got your message. I already have something planned for Chapter 9. But I'll do it for Chapter 10. I promise you that. -TTG (March 02, 2013; 7:05 PM EST)

Finished the Johnson chapter ;) SirLinkalot96 (talk) 23:04, March 3, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, sure, we can have Danielle and Greg meet. Good idea, dude SirLinkalot96 (talk) 19:43, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry man I've been SUPER busy(emphasis on super). How've you been. BTW I just posted a new blog, so if you wanna check it out you can.Cdc1998 (talk) 15:33, March 8, 2013 (UTC)

Greg hardly talks to the preps anymore, but they could meet if they want. Greg could be a dick to him lol SirLinkalot96 (talk) 17:49, March 8, 2013 (UTC)

Well...
To be honest, real life has swallowed everybody whole, and the RP forum has been inactive for months D:

I still chat with Memai and UnknownTerritory, though, so if you wanted to start up a new thread over there, I could let them know for you. Or we could RP here, maybe through comments? To be honest, I really miss RPing Bully things, but the forums haven't been the same since most of the old group left :C

Professorpineapple (talk) 17:13, March 11, 2013 (UTC)

Future Chapter
Hey, I'm in the middle of writing my new Greg Ryder chapter. What do you want the dirt Greg finds on Michael for VP Johnson? Hit me back ASAP SirLinkalot96 (talk) 18:15, March 11, 2013 (UTC)

Sounds good. I'll work on it later today. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 10:59, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Hey man I finished the fight chapter between Patrick & Charles. Can I get your opinion on it?Cdc1998 (talk) 14:09, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

Michael and Greg
Hey, how do you think Michael should react to Greg being the rat? Btw, how do you think Michael should find out? Should Michael blindly accuse Greg of being the rat or should he find evidence of it? Perhaps Michael connects the dots and figures it all out? When he does that, how do you think Michael should react and deal with Greg? Message me back, dude. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 17:03, March 23, 2013 (UTC)

Sounds good. But would Michael be understanding if Greg told him that he was placed in a predicament that he couldn't get out of? Greg even left some very important details out from his reports to Johnson, like he didn't talk about C-Money's relationship with Max Hayes and the G.S. Crew for example. Would he still mistrust Greg then? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:47, March 24, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, cool. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 13:33, March 24, 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the message man, it helps. Well now I'm finally back at school, I missed a few days due to helping with the funeral. I was also one of the people to carry the casket. Now that I'm back at school I'm pissed off again, bcause the teachers are being dicks, except for my nglish teacher, probably ecause she's 26 while the rest of my teachers are older. How've you been? BTW would you mind if I start on the homecoming chapter efore I finish my chapter 40? I'm going to need to watch The Breakfast Club a few more times.Cdc1998 (talk) 14:06, March 26, 2013 (UTC)

Reply
I really don't know what I have planned for him yet, got any ideas? BTW I drove a car for the first time yesterday. It was my sister's and I actually did pretty good. How've you been man?Cdc1998 (talk) 20:00, March 31, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, sounds good. You can go for it. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 20:35, March 31, 2013 (UTC)

I got another year for that, but I can get my temps this August. The weather is kinda alright. I'm just glad that I'm on spring break.Cdc1998 (talk) 19:18, April 2, 2013 (UTC)

Haha. Hey serious question man, do you think the US will be safe with the whole NK buisness going on? Its freaking me out. I'm worried for all the people I know around the US.Cdc1998 (talk) 21:38, April 4, 2013 (UTC)

I see your point, but it still freaks me out. Like today I heard they moved more missles and Fidel Castro doesnt even want them to do all whats been going on. Off topic have you seen any good movies recently?Cdc1998 (talk) 00:02, April 6, 2013 (UTC)

Yup, just like childhood. I've been looking to buy the movie Three O'Clock High but I can't find it anywhere. I can't wait for the new Sin City coming this October. Also looking forward to any new games coming out this year? I absolutely can't wait for Grand Theft Auto V.Cdc1998 (talk) 21:47, April 6, 2013 (UTC)

Sweet man. Hey, if Rockstar EVER does a sequel to Bully(I put emphasis on ever because Bully was a great game, and its been about 7 years since it came out) do you think co-op would be a good feature?208.102.73.81 17:11, April 8, 2013 (UTC)

That was me. Sorry I forgot to log in.Cdc1998 (talk) 20:15, April 8, 2013 (UTC)

Hey bro, the wiki's been dead and I've been wondering how you've been?Cdc1998 (talk) 14:25, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

Done with the Greg Ryder chapter. Check it out! SirLinkalot96 (talk) 20:06, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

It's cool. Here's an idea I have. Later, Greg's plan is (SPOILER ALERT) that he's going to cut ties with Johnson. And he knows by doing this, Johnson is going to have him arrested for the drugs. So he plans to run away from Bullworth and go to Liberty City, and visit his mom. My plan is, that Nicole becomes concerned with Greg's depressed attitude and behavior, so she goes to his dorm room to visit him. She doesn't want Michael to know she's visiting him so she goes very late at night when everyone's asleep. She finds him packing his stuff, and she questions him. He replies that he's leaving, stating that there's nothing left for him here, and that Johnson is going to have him arrested. She pleads him not to run away, and that she confesses that she is lucky to have him as a friend, and it would kill her to never see him again. Greg states that he's still leaving, and that it's 'for the best' and to tell Michael that he's sorry for what he did, and he hopes that his friends can find it in his heart to forgive him. Greg is walking to his motorcycle with Nicole following him, begging him not to leave. She starts to cry and Greg hugs her, telling her that he'll come back when 'everything blows over'. Nicole kisses him on the cheek goodbye and he drives away. Unknowingly, while Nicole kisses Greg on the cheek, someone takes a picture of it, and leaves it on Michael's desk the next morning, making Michael want to kill Greg. How's THAT for major conflict?! SirLinkalot96 (talk) 20:33, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, Bradi can call Greg. How will she manage to make peace with the two? Greg doesn't want to, or simply can't, come back to Bullworth until his name is cleared. Greg could ask Michael to dig up some dirt on Johnson so he can come back? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 20:42, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

That sounds like a good idea! I will try and write the next chapter next week. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 20:53, April 11, 2013 (UTC)

Hey bro what's up? I think I'm going to morph my chapter 42 with my 41, so I'm kinda having writers block. I also have to finish my chapters 40 & 41. So, do you have some ideas for a chapter I could do or both of us could do?Cdc1998 (talk) 14:25, April 15, 2013 (UTC)

Hey, the chapter where Greg runs away is complete. It involves Nicole, as planned. Check it out SirLinkalot96 (talk) 00:47, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Response
Yeah, man, I'm fine. The scariest part is: I almost went to the marathon today with my best friend, and whenever I go, I always watch from the finish line area, which is where both bombs went off. Everyone is saying that there was so much blood on the street in the area where the explosions occured. If I went today, I'd either be dead or seriously injured. I just feel terrible for what little humanity that people in this world possess. First Aurora, then Newtown, then Boston?! Isn't ANYWHERE safe these days?? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:46, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

My friend couldn't get a ride. We missed the T (that's what we call the train in Boston haha) and couldn't go. So we just went home and an hour later, BAM! The bombing happened. Crazy stuff, dude. What did you hear from out West? Did you have good coverage like we did (cuz I'm south of Boston) or did you find out about the major details after the fact? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 03:03, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Holy shit, that musta been scary! What's terrible about the whole thing, is that I feel numb. I can't express any emotion whatsoever about this event. I feel numb probably because I am kinda in shock about the whole ordeal, but I personally believe it's because so much horrible shit has been happening for the past year, I kinda taught myself "This is what's happening in the world now, so we might as well get used to it" Am I a bad person for feeling that way? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 03:33, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Oh yeah, did you read the new Greg Ryder chapter? Do you have any feedback on Nicole's portrayal? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 03:41, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Bradi should call Greg (she got his phone # from Nicole) and keep him up to date on what's going on with everyone back at the Academy while he's on the road. She informs him that Michael thinks that Nicole was cheating on him with Greg, and he pretty much wants to kill him. I think Bradi tries to convince Michael to call him. I also think it would be interesting to see Michael have an inner debate with himself, almost talking to himself, about whether or not he should call Greg. Like he looks at his name on his contacts in his phone, but can't bring himself to call him. Eventually he calls him and Greg picks up. They aren't screaming at each other just yet, I think Michael should (at first he DOES call Greg, and leaves him a very angry voicemail. You can choose what he says.) Michael eventually after a couple weeks, calls Greg and reluctantly decides to help Greg clear his name. Michael doesn't know why he does it, and he questions himself for it. How's that? Also, finish up your chapter, dude! I'm aching to see what happens next! SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:31, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, I didn't see you updated your chapter. You should have Michael call Greg and leave him a nasty, threatening, angry voicemail. It would display how distraught and angry Michael is in this situation. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 02:35, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

It's good! I like how you show the contrast in how Michael can be angry and depressed at the same time, often shifting from one to the other. Also, in the next chapter of mine, I'm going to have Greg camping out on the road, and that's when Michael calls Greg and berates him in the voicemail. I know I seem like I'm bugging you with this idea, but I think it's a good idea lol. And it would show how pissed off Michael can get, and for the readers, it would be the most pissed off they've ever seen him, or ever will see.

Sure, that sounds good. Will Michael still be mad at Greg? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 14:47, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

Agreed. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 12:35, April 21, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, I actually haven't been able to play any Fallout games, so I'm not familiar with the series. Memai and Zak are into it, though, so maybe try asking one of them?

I do know a teensy bit about it, though, and it seems like the world is very strange and interesting, so I'd suggest writing a fic about some other part of the Fallout world, rather than the main storyline. Maybe explore an interesting group of side-characters or something? (Sorry for being vague - like I said, I don't know the series. The Bully equivalent of that would be like, instead of writing about an OC who fights all the cliques and is basically Jimmy 2.0, writing about an OC who joins a clique and fits in with them and does things the way their clique-mates would.)

Wish I could be of more help. If you ever need help with general characterization issues or anything, just drop me a message :)Professorpineapple (talk) 02:49, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Danielle Diaz
Hey, I made this avatar for Danielle's character page. Do you like it? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 19:26, April 22, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, you can use C-Money for your chapter. I'm not sure if I'll be doing my version of the training though. I have some other plans for the next few chapters. Sorry. -TTG (April 22, 2013; 6:22 PM EDT)

Hey man, I finally finished my chapter 41. Can I get your opinion on it?Cdc1998 (talk) 14:10, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Outlast
Hey, dude. I remember you saying you liked the Amnesia series once? There's this upcoming horror game called 'Outlast' and everyone is saying it's the scariest game since Amnesia, and some are saying that it's even scarier, if you could ACTUALLY believe that! Check out these reactions to the demo

http://www.ign.com/videos/2013/04/23/how-scary-is-outlast

SirLinkalot96 (talk) 21:59, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Hey, can I get your opinion on Nicole's portrayal in my chapters and what you think of the latest Greg Ryder chapter, the one where you meet his family? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 22:47, April 25, 2013 (UTC)

Hey man, haven't talked to you in a while, how've you been?Cdc1998 (talk) 13:57, April 30, 2013 (UTC)

I've ben busy too. Just been dealing with schoolwork & trying to raise my grades you know? There was a kid who shot himself at la salle high-school here in Cincinnati yesterday but he's still alive. I don't go to la salle though. I've been playing borderlands 2 and finally beat the story yesterday, and I heard a new grand theft auto v trailer comes out today. Cdc1998 (talk) 14:35, April 30, 2013 (UTC)

Also I've just been hanging with my friends & bonding with my english teacher(she kinda reminds me of you because you're both sarcastic at timess and the same age). Random question, but have you ever played Borderlands 2? Also if you did what character did you pick & what was your rank?Cdc1998 (talk) 14:35, May 2, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, I know. I just read it a couple minutes ago. Now for planning. How should we have Johnson taken down? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 21:27, May 12, 2013 (UTC)

Hm, I don't know... We'll think of something. Hit me back if you think of something. I'll do the same. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 21:31, May 12, 2013 (UTC)

Kinda. I've been busy with school, chatting with Yasemin Arslan(she did the motion capture for Lilith in Borderlands 2), and I cant think of what to write. Got any ideas?Cdc1998 (talk) 23:57, May 12, 2013 (UTC)

For later in your chapter and my chapter, why don't Charles, Michael and C-Money think of a plan where they could clear Greg's and get even on Johnson. Michael and Charles suggest that C-Money talks to Derek about how to do it. C-Money agrees, but claims that he will only do that and not anything else as he lost his respect for him. -TTG (May 13, 2013; 9:42 AM)

Oh yeah? What's your idea, man? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 21:22, May 14, 2013 (UTC)

That sounds good! I'll get to work on it this week (I have work off this week except Saturday) SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:21, May 15, 2013 (UTC)

Hey man, whenever you're on here and have free time can you check out my latest blog? Also aren't you getting married next month?Cdc1998 (talk) 04:33, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

Congrats man. I've been fine, I'm trying to learn guitar, but really can't find any guitar stores in Cincinnati.Cdc1998 (talk) 17:21, May 18, 2013 (UTC)

Well, how about Greg goes on a foot chase with a couple cops on his tail. How about he loses him through the subway via the train, and Greg meets Michael at the subway station? Where would we go from there? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 00:27, May 21, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, sounds good. I'll start this week. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 00:34, May 21, 2013 (UTC)

When does Michael go to Liberty City to save Greg? Like datewise? Message me back as soon as you get this. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 21:05, May 23, 2013 (UTC)

Response~
No problem! I'll be pretty busy within the next few weeks or so, as I just got a job (first job ever :'D ) but I'll be happy to look over your characters when I get the chance. I like your idea of having different folks giving different perspectives on the canon storyline - it'll be a unique twist on the story we all know and love.

Also, I think it's awesome that you're stepping out of your comfort zone a bit with these characters. Wimpy rich kids aren't exactly the norm around here :P Playing around with different kinds of characters can really help to improve your writing skills. I can't wait to see your new OCs! Professorpineapple (talk) 15:29, June 6, 2013 (UTC)

Well hey, there's nothing wrong with just writing for funsies, so long as you're not hurting anybody. To be honest, the big ongoing story everybody's writing together on the wiki looks like a fun project, even if it does read like it's mostly wish-fulfillment :P But it's really cool that you've decided to take it a little more seriously. If you ask me, one of the best feelings is writing something you're really proud of and having other people enjoy it.

That being said, engineering's probably a more stable career choice, so it's good that you went with that! It's hard to make it as a successful author, even if you're really skilled. It's mostly about luck. And marketting. But writing as a hobby is tons of fun :DProfessorpineapple (talk) 00:49, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

On the Anon's "page" it said that you were the one that banned them? Not that it matters now, I guess.

It'll probably take a while to get up to where you want to be with your writing, but don't give up! The best way to learn is through trial and error. Also, you should read a lot if you don't already. Not just fanfictions (because let's face it, most fics are subpar at best. Yes, I am including mine in that statement :P) but different kinds of published works, to get a feel of how different writers handle different subjects.

Also, Link has also come to me asking for critique, as well as leaving a few critiques of his own around the wiki. Since you both want to improve, I think it might be a good idea if you two tried to help each other out? Though you're both beginners, learning how to take and leave critiques can be really helpful. Food for thought :) Professorpineapple (talk) 03:54, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

That's strange. Maybe one of the less active mods dropped in, and it was just some kind of glitch?

YES GAME OF THRONES KEEP READING GAME OF THRONES

GAME OF THRONES IS A GOOD SERIES

VERY GOOD FOR YOUR WRITING

YES

!!!!

In all seriousness, it's good to read a lot of different genres, even if you only intend to write one in particular. If you only stick to your genre, you might end up running into a lot of the same tropes and cliches that are common in that genre, and your story might be kind of stale. If you branch out, you may find inspiration in an unlikely place.Professorpineapple (talk) 04:06, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Game of Thrones is a fantastic series! I'm halfway through the third book right now. It's so stressful, but so addicting! And Tex is probably my favorite S.E. Hinton book, though I haven't read anything by her in ages. Zak keeps telling me about one that's kind of a continuation of The Outsiders, but focused on one of the minor characters (I can't remember which one now), and it involves someone who shows up in Tex. So all of Hinton's books are connected, I guess, and that is so rad ; w; Professorpineapple (talk) 04:16, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Cool beans, I'll try to go over them this weekend. Also, keep in mind that it's okay if your character profiles aren't perfect, and if traits change and develop while you're writing the story itself. Initial character sheets are mostly just guidelines for you to follow while you get the hang of the character.

I know Stevie changed a lot from when I first posted him to the RP forum years ago - some traits I thought would be important ended up fading into the background, while minor details ended up growing into key parts of his personality. Hell, the thing about him believing in spies and secret agents came from a sex joke in a side-thread. Your characters may surprise you :P

Professorpineapple (talk) 15:40, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Critiquing
Hey, Professor Pineapple suggested that we should buddy up and critique each other's stories. Is this cool with you? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 18:07, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

What about Michael? Are you still gonna do those? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 19:19, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, I understand. I'll check out your chapters (when they come out) and your character pages. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 19:23, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

Dude, did you delete Michael Diaz's character page? I can't find it anywhere SirLinkalot96 (talk) 19:28, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

If you think that's best, go for it. Writing three intertwining stories at once sounds like a lot of work, anyway. Honestly, I thought Steven sounded like he had a lot of potential from his bio, it was just the execution that missed the mark. Maybe you could keep him in the story, just not write any chapters from his perspective? I mean, obviously it's up to you, but sometimes the best way to rework a character is to just start writing with them, and let them develop and improve with the story. Professorpineapple (talk) 20:00, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

<p class="western" style="margin-bottom: 0cm">Michael, I just wanted to apologise for blasting your character design. You obviously put a lot of time and effort into is so what I said was really quite out of order. I was just a little dismayed it was a bit of a one-sided design, but what I said was non-constructive and unfair. I hope you didn't take my point-black opinion to heart, and that you continue with writing and character design. I'm not an actual user to this site, but I can see that you've removed the page and sincerely hope it wasn't because of what I said.

<p class="western" style="margin-bottom: 0cm">

<p class="western" style="margin-bottom: 0cm">I really am sorry for such an aggressive comment, and I wish you all the best of luck with your writing and character design in the future.

That's good that you're doing that. All he really needs is some tweaks to his personality and behavior so he'd seem less Marty Sue, you know? SirLinkalot96 (talk) 20:15, June 10, 2013 (UTC)

I know this is 3 days late, but congrats on getting married bro. I wish the best of luck to you both. How've you been?Cdc1998 (talk) 21:49, June 10, 2013 (UTC)

My bad. I thought it wsas the 7th because I remember you leaving me a message mentioning the 7th. How've you been man, busy?Cdc1998 (talk) 23:40, June 10, 2013 (UTC)

Well I've been basking in the glory of no longer being a freshman(lol), family issues, and I've had major writer's blockCdc1998 (talk) 02:47, June 11, 2013 (UTC)

Reply
Sounds good dude. I have finals this week, and i will be done Friday, so i can finish my chapter then. SirLinkalot96 (talk) 00:46, June 18, 2013 (UTC)

Congrats:
Congrats on getting married Michael. I wish the both of you the best of luck.Cdc1998 (talk) 22:31, June 26, 2013 (UTC)

Actually, I don't think that C-Money would try and get revenge on Michael since he only wanted to get revenge on Greg and that Michael is tougher than C-Money. Why not Michael and Greg just avoid C-Money, or maybe C-Money avoids Michael because he feels Michael lost his trust for him? After all, C-Money intentionally only wanted revenge on Greg. -TTG (June 27, 2013; 12:54 PM EDT)

Yeah, that does sound good. -TTG (June 27, 2013; 1:25 PM EDT)

Hey Michael, I just wanted to let you know I might not be on tomorrow. One of my sister's neighbors hopped down to my balcony and tried to break in and tried to fight me & my mom. Luckily he was arrested. I'm very stressed right now. but I just wanted to let you knowCdc1998 (talk) 03:18, July 1, 2013 (UTC)

Do you think I was a little harsh? Idk SirLinkalot96 (talk) 00:43, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Great idea man. I'll put it in my next chapter.Cdc1998 (talk) 22:19, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Fuck yes I saw it!! It looks so good! Your friend's gonna be an extra?? That's so cool! In the second episode of the first season, my friend who goes to UGA, they had signups for students to be walkers on the show. My friend got on and he was shot by Rick when he was running out of the tank. Isn't that awesome?? It'd be such an honor to be a walker on that show :D  SirLinkalot96 (talk) 14:08, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, but on a serious note, I saw you block that IP for one month. Was that the same one as before? You know, the one who edited Stevie Stapleton's character page and added a bogus quote? If so, then permaban him. He already had his chance. You're too damn nice lol SirLinkalot96 (talk) 23:18, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

No clue. But it isn't nearly as bad as last year or two years ago when all these IP's were showing up and raising hell. Let's just be grateful that hasn't happened since. Knock on wood lol SirLinkalot96 (talk) 23:29, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, I have writer's block. That and the lack of motivation. I'm gonna have to repeat my junior year in a private school. So, I've been trying to deal with that, and the effort I'm making to try and get into this school is stressing me out, ya know? I know I seem like I'm making excuses but it's true. Sorry about making you wait =/ SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:45, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, and I love how you blocked that IP lol. Made me laugh xD SirLinkalot96 (talk) 01:46, July 24, 2013 (UTC)


 * ^Michael is the sassiest member on this wiki it's official Rose 06:33, July 24, 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes you really are. "You've earned one FREE BLOCK!" You are like the Sassmaster dude congrats A+ 10/10 Rose 00:41, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

This needed a new headline.
Ding dong you are wrong I am the sexiest. Rose 04:46, July 25, 2013 (UTC)