Thread:WayfinderOwl/@comment-2099017-20151105164822/@comment-5385060-20151105173954

Fair point, and makes sense. Oddly enough, I could imagine the less mature members of the crew settling at the carnival. Don't know why. Will the carnival ever play a part in your story? No one has mentioned it. A place like that is the best place to hide. With all the rides and so on.

I also wanted to say, I liked that part where Clayton talked about his feelings since having to kill. Fully understandable that he would have nightmares and be unable to sleep. I think you wrote that part well. (I'll comment on the blog, when the chapter is finished.)