Talk:Charles Caldwell/@comment-4675595-20130725163854/@comment-24.189.193.11-20130727054358

"Charles is nice to people, however, if someone were to get on his bad side he's not above being a jerk to them. He wouldn't want them to come to harm, but he also doesn't want to be friendly towards them." That sounds better than what you wrote, and explains it better.

"Although he will always go out of his way to help his friends, such as letting himself get expelled to save everybody else". That doesn't make sense-- if his main goal was to graduate, he wouldn't allow himself to be expelled for his friends sake. Also, taking the rap for his friends  would make him be looked down upon, as he would be considered a deliquent.

"He is on bad standings with cliques because he isn't respectful towards them, especially towards the jocks". Why? Why does he treat cliques so disrespectfully? I thought he was nice to people until they were mean to him. That a contradiction. Why does he hate the Jocks so much? Does he have a grudge against them? Does he not like popular kids? Wouldn't he hate the Preps just as much for those reasons? Having anger problems is not a reason, it just means he has a bad temper.

"he cannot always act tough". Why not? That's not really a limitation. Limitation would be negative personality traits. Like with Eli, he's a cocky piece of shit who talks smack but can't back up his words if they were to come to blows. He's stupid, childish, arrogant, stubborn, and refuses to be friends with anyone outside of his circle of 'coolness'. You have a lot of strengths for Charles, but most of his negative strengths stem from 'he's not that tough'. That's boring as fuck.

''"fears of being looked down upon". ''Again, why is he okay with being the 'bad kid', but totally not okay with being looked down on? Is he a pushover and that's why he takes the rap for his friends? No one level headed, who cared about what people think of them, would allow their reputation to be tarnished.

"Charles can be compared to Hyde from That '70s Show because he doesn't trust the government". I'd vote cut this out and just add the fact that he doesn't trust the government and elaborat as to why. Is he paranoid? Past experiences? Is he really into politics?

Zak