Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-2173402-20160317001721

Hey guys :B

Sooo I know it's been like seven years since I've written anything but I was still thinking I wanted to get some feedback on one of my stories, Millstone in particular c:

So yeah just what do you guys think of it/is there anything I should change or start doing or stop doing or????

Alright thanks guys <3 