User blog comment:SodaCat/style chapter 3/@comment-26358727-20150625233254

I love, love, love the way you've written Johnny and Lola in this chapter. I feel like this is possibly the most authentic telling of Johnny's puppy love outside of what the game tells us. He's so foolishly hung up on her that he, in turn, looks like a fool himself. That's the part I like the best about his character, that's he's tough and well-respected, but he's so tripped up over a woman like Lola... you brought it to life perfectly.

That being said, I also enjoy the way you're setting this up for a big explosion further down the line. We can already see the tension mounting between Alexis and Johnny, even when they barely had a chance to interact because things have gone cold between them.

It's going to be awesome! (

Can't wait for more!