User blog comment:SodaCat/Millstone - Introduction/@comment-26358727-20150926003752/@comment-26358727-20150926004913

Nooo, I think it's a good thing that your headcanons give things away. It means that you're writing consistently and keeping things linear, even if they aren't really your characters or the interpretations are really open-ended.

I really love the way you write them from your sentence stories, so knowing it was the Bullies really put it right into perspective. Now I'm even more excited; knowing how you wrote them before, and the subject matter, I can't wait to see what you have in store for them with this being the introduction!

Excellent start, and excellently written! ( :