User blog comment:SodaCat/Bullworth Nights: Chapter 6/@comment-26358727-20150619011800

Hey, maybe I don't read enough romance, but I didn't find this chapter to be particularly cliche. I happened to enjoy it; it's entertaining and you can get away with a few cheesy plot twists because it's well-written. Personally, I find it more endearing than annoying.

However, there's one part that's concerning: two paragraphs that are eerily similar, and I'm not sure if one was meant to be cut out of the final version? One begins with "Groaning, Alexis glanced over the instructions..." and the other begins, "Sighing, Alexis glanced over the instructions...". They read very similar, with a couple of variations, but I just thought I'd point it out for you.

Otherwise, it's great! ( :  I look forward to whatever you've got coming up next!