Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-5385060-20151221234837/@comment-2173402-20151222214558

Feeling you're in a ditch is the worst thing with writing. I'm not sure where you want to go with Josh exactly, but it feels as if this is a build up to Josh becoming as pompous and entitled as the Jocks (since the pattern seems to be similar to Bully, I'm guessing that's where he's headed next x'D or maybe Nerds, I think they might've come first??? Oh well). It feels like the more Johnny trusts him, the more withdrawn Josh becomes from Pete. It's interesting.

So you say you want to have him mature? You could have something more or less similar to Johnny's hypothetical downfall. The whole, you were a great leader and now look at how you've thrown yourself away for a girl. Only, Josh does it about Johnny. From what I can tell about Josh's attitude towards Johnny, Josh is his sheep. Blindly follows Johnny to wherever Johnny will go. Lola is to Johnny as Johnny is to Josh. He'd probably open his eyes to how he's treating Pete, and his other friends, if they all get angry with him and remind him how he's acting with Johnny. Then he'd be careful not to go blind over another clique leader like that.