User blog comment:TheToughGuy/Coming Soon: BULLY: THE UNDEAD STORY/@comment-1824274-20131226210905/@comment-1824274-20140101070206

Trust me, my zombie chapters (the fact that I made them makes me shudder and cringe to to end lol) were fucking terrible. Poorly written, poor plot, and just poor logic.

Greg was completely out of character multiple times, and there were plot holes carrying over from the original story (example: Greg still having his guns after he threw them out immediately after the death of Doug, when it is specifically mentioned that Doug is long dead before the beginning of the zombie story, so why would Greg still have his guns?). Another one of my favorite fuck ups in that short lived saga is when Two Bit says that a zombified Johnny Vincent tried to bite him, and Greg stops the car and demands Two Bit to tell him if he was bitten or not, when it is clearly the beginning of the zombie outbreak, and no one knows this for a fact! Plus, Greg was just being a shithead douchelicker in that situation. He was obviously basing his knowledge off of zombie movies and games (double head shot, seriously, Link? Zombieland?) So he was willing to straight up murder a kid in cold blood over a half assed assumption and be totally fine with it.

It made Greg seem like he was an idiot who was too all-knowing for his own good. Like he was half an author and half a character, where the author knows things that the characters shouldn't know about at a certain point. And at that point, Greg hasn't had NEARLY enough experience with surviving the outbreak to truly know what he was doing. If I ever make another version of it, I'm going to revamp it and make it so it takes place after everything went to hell (NOT a coma situation like Rick Grimes from Walking Dead!)

I also had many canon characters acting and behaving differently than they normally would in certain situations. And looking back on the zombie chapters, with how they were set up and there were just so many random moments that didn't make any sense.

Hell, it is actually A LOT easier than you think haha.