User blog comment:TheToughGuy/A Night On Campus For C-Money: Chapter 9/@comment-5385060-20160501014455

I can't believe I missed this. I like how the killer is totally toying with C-Money. Hiding all the crowbars was probably deliberate, so he would be caught with a murder weapon. All the twists in this are so unexpected, but in a good way. Even stuff that turns out to be nothing, before it is revealed to be nothing, I'm still wondering if it is a clue or something.

I got to say, TTG, you just get better and better with each story I've read. So far, I've only read two stories of yours from begining to end, and I have to admit, you're really finding your voice as a writer. Especially ones with a mystery in them. I have noticed, that in some instances, you lay out all the clues for the end in such a subtle way, that when the ending comes it isn't completely out of nowhere but still a surprise if the person reading it isn't paying close enough attention.