User blog comment:Memai/DEFACED (drabble -- OCs)/@comment-3145713-20120613125111

Yay! Memai finally posts a fanfic! =D

Terrance Arbuckel? Jon Arbuckle? Heh...that was the first thing that came to mind.

Well, I just want to make a correction in one part: "Drawing on crude penises over the photographs..." There's no need for "on" in that sentence. "Drawing crude penises over..." suffices.

That aside, great start. Don't really see anything wrong or out of the ordinary.