User blog comment:KitCalling/Second Chances - Welcome to the Doghouse/@comment-4059927-20180907185309

I loved the way you introduced Adrian. Touching on his backstory was really good because you didn't reveal too much and it kept my eyes glued to the screen as I tried to unravel the events that transpired prior to his arrival. Also Clive wasn't what I expected. Usually, and I'm guilty of including this in my writing too, when a guy has a fearsome reputation I've always seen that the guy people write about is a physical brute who towers over others and induces fear into the minds of his enemies. Clive is unassuming and I have so many questions. We see him calm, and a little cautionary but we have yet to see him explode and show the side he is so well known for. This is an excellent start and I can't wait for more!