User blog comment:SodaCat/Polar/@comment-4833053-20150825212711

Wow, it feels like I haven't been on here in ages. Been busy with school so much I've barely had any time to edit (plus having writer's block :p)

I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this chapter. The way you have these characters interract is really lifelike, and as I mentioned with Jesse, I could picture these characters as actual characters in Bully. Also, the way you write is very descriptive, and honestly, I'm a little jealous :p (Being descriptive with setting and character action is not really my strong point(I'm better with dialogue), and it's something I really need to improve on, yet I don't really know where to start.)

Anyways, great chapter. I really like the characters you write, Soda.