User blog comment:SodaCat/Style Chapter 6/@comment-26358727-20150707023612

Wow, awesome chapter! And I can certainly see more incorporation of "Fourth of July" now that I know the song (that last line in particular, haha)!

I like the direction you've gone here, where instead of becoming strictly sad and mopey, Alexis has become angry. It's a reasonably realistic response, especially given her background, so it'll be interesting to see the tension develop further between her and Johnny!

It was also awesome to see Alexis interact with Ricky in a rather personal way. Up until now, it's been almost exclusively Alexis, Peanut and Johnny. They have a good chemistry, but her interactions with some of the other greasers is certainly some welcome insight! ( :

Also, I have to ask, do you plan on crossing her path with Piper again at some point? I noticed in the character sheet you uploaded for Alexis that she and Piper are/will be friends and with Piper being her roommate, it might become evident that something's wrong when she disappears for a week without a word. It would be very interesting to see some development between the two of them concerning Alexis' breakdown because, as we've seen, she's certainly not very good at hiding her distress.

Regardless, it's another great chapter, and I look forward to seeing where it goes from here!