Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-5385060-20151221234837

Okay, here is my problem; I'm five chapters in, and I don't feel I'm hitting the goal I made for this. To show Josh maturing, and really growing as a person.

In case you haven't read them yet, here are all the chapters;


 * It's Tha Fifties Somwewhere 1
 * It's Tha Fifties Somewhere 2


 * It's Tha Fifties Somewhere 3
 * It's Tha Fifties Somewhere 4


 * It's Tha Fifties Somewhere 5

Every time I read it, I notice that Josh hasn't really changed all that much since the Prep arc, other than being a little bit of a dick to Pete, and being all starstruck over Johnny Vincent, and openly fighting back in the Prep/Greaser war.

I'd like some constructive feedback, on how to go on from here. 