User blog comment:MichaelDiaz101/Blindness/@comment-26358727-20150716235400/@comment-26358727-20150717200622

'What if' scenarios are fantastic because they're very open to interpretation. You can't really go wrong in adding your own spin to a 'what if' because you've got all the logic of the source material to back you up. It's very possible that coming to terms with the reality of his relationship would be the undoing of Johnny because he's already forsaken so much of himself to keep loving her.

Hey, look, don't stress yourself out over writing. If you've been working too hard lately, take some time and rest yourself; this is a hobby, and I'd hate to see you kill the motivation to keep doing it because of the pressure. So take a little break from writing for now, and when you're feeling rejuvenated, take another look at it ( :