Thread:SodaCat/@comment-5385060-20151101205636/@comment-5385060-20151102195843

While Milo stands there with a stupid proud grin on his face.

Yeah it really is, considering Rockstar never bothered to dig deeper into that.

I would like to think my writing style has changed or gotten better. This might sound conceited; I'm so used to people telling me my stories are good, or my writing is great, it is like water off a duck's back. Sometimes I just wish people would tell me what I did to make my story so good. Or what makes my writing to great, so I can divert my attention from that area, and focus on areas that need improvement.