User blog comment:Memai/Why I cannot take your OC seriously./@comment-4679119-20120216030310/@comment-2109247-20120216133732

In some way I actually need this...

I know I have made alot of mistakes in the past...

I remember writng everything that my character did, step-by-step. To think back on it now, it was insipid and it lacked life!

Who cared what she wore, who cared if she did this-or that. I was even beginning to think that there was something wrong with the story that I changed it at least 4 to 5 times. IT WAS THAT BAD!!!

I knew that there was something wrong, and that's why I asked the community to critique it, but no one knew how. I kept on getting comments like, "Oh, great story." "Can't wait for the next chapter!"

Ok, what about the story did you like? Any suggestions on what they can do anything better next time? More detail? Less detail? A little romance? Less romance? Action/ Adventure? You get what I'm saying?...

Those comments don't help!!! I have barely heard an "actual" comment on the story! Not ever!

I'm going to try and take the harsh criticism like Simon on American idol... I've been given worse by the Voices...