Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-5385060-20160316021500

I like the idea of Antonia, in that she is some conflict for Milo. I'm just at a loss to see the potenial for her.

I'd like some feedback, on how I can further develop her or maybe someone sees some potential I don't...

I really don't want to abandon her, because I feel like she is a blank canvas, I don't see the picture forming yet. I'd feel bad if someone else took her from me, and saw some great potential that I didn't.

So, ideas, thoughts, con-crit, suggestions, let me have it. Seriously, don't sugar coat it. 