User blog comment:MichaelDiaz101/Flowers for a Girl/@comment-26358727-20171227133324

I really like this piece a lot, Michael! It's short and sweet, straight to the point, and it captures the stark contrast between the characters so well.

You really nail small-talk and banter between characters right on the head, you know that?

The description of Beatrice's room, I think, stands out the most just because the language used is so picturesque. Something about the aged, wooden desk doesn't just sets the atmosphere of the room, but it also says Beatrice: a little bit old-fashioned and modest in contrast to the other girls on campus, but truly captivating in the eyes of someone who sees more than just a desk. ( :