User blog comment:SirLinkalot96/The Wall Ryder: Chapter One: Consequences/@comment-2173402-20151205010440

Impressive improvement from your first stories about Greg, really, I applaud you. I think third person is a good fit for you; only slight issue I noticed was switching back and forth from past and present tense, but other than that, good. Plot wise, I'm immediately captivated. You've done really well; I love seeing all this insight to Greg. Great job, dude.