User blog comment:MichaelDiaz101/Recollection of the Mind: Chapter Three/@comment-1824274-20181018144105

I'm really liking how you are beginning to unfold Darrion's character, and leaving us with more questions than answers about him. He really embodies everything that is truly horrible about the teenage sociopath, and I can guarantee we all knew someone similar to Darrion at some point when we were around James' age (I know I did lol). Once you think you have an idea of what Darrion is all about, he goes and does something that really surprises you and makes you wonder the depth of his personality (him saving James from the Bullies despite tormenting him).

I also really like how you wrote James, he is beginning to lose hope at Bullworth Academy and with Darrion on top of everything else he has been through is really taking it's toll on him. He is beginning to stand up for himself just out of sheer frustration and anger, like how he blew up on the Bullies so quickly. James on his first day at Bullworth would NEVER have even considered doing that. It almost makes you wonder if that's Darrion's goal, or if he has something more sinister in mind for James! Can't wait to see where you take this story and horrible roommate of James haha