Talk:Jason Griffith/@comment-4369319-20170523112838

I actually love how you wrote an actual, shitty teen punk. Like, man I LIVE for these trainwrecks! There's not much that I can see character-wise (I'll try reading through the excerpt you linked) but overall! I feel like he'd fit in really well in Bullworth? Given that there are tons of punk-like outfits and whatnot even in New Coventry.

I guess my only nitpick would be that he's got a bit of an odd relationship with his clique-- he rules them fiercely but also loves them a lot. Does this mean he gives them a lot of tough love and encouragement? I think that can always be expanded on, but like I said, that's just a nit pick.

LOVE HIM <3