User blog comment:TheToughGuy/BULLY: THE UNDEAD STORY--Chapter 31/@comment-26358727-20151215141519

I'm sad that this is coming to an end, but at the same time, what an end! I thought for sure they were going to lose Clayton - which would have made the whole thing really upsetting - but I'm glad that he returned in a realistic and plausible way.

That said, I think the chemistry between Jimmy and Pete working together to avenge their lost companion really added something to their friendship that the game missed out on. Jimmy's always running around doing everything himself and leaving Pete behind, so I love that even if it's just a small and simple thing, you've really expanded on their friendship throughout the course of the story. I felt it a lot here, because they're literally back-to-back and saving each other from these monsters.

And I really like the way you wrapped it up, too. A happy and sweet ending, despite all the devastation and tragedy throughout the story. I just hope we don't see someone else stealing the necklace and the entire thing starting all over again! They should really try to rope some firecrackers together and collapse that damn tunnel to avoid anyone getting any funny ideas, you know?

Lastly, there are just a couple of typos I caught and thought to point out: I think in writing 'in the vass darkness', you probably meant "vast" instead. Also, at one point Jimmy says, ""Trust me, I'll fine."  I think you also missed an "h" in 'down the all'.  Finally, the correct phrase Clayton was looking for was "deja vu".

Otherwise, what a great story and a wonderful take on the characters in a zombie apocalypse setting! I loved it, and I'm so glad that you followed it all the way through to the end. Anxiously awaiting the epilogue and those short side-stories you've got planned!

You've really got something to be proud of here!