User blog comment:TheToughGuy/Coming Soon: BULLY: THE UNDEAD STORY/@comment-1824274-20131226210905

A tip: Don't add many references to video games/movies unless it is relevant to the plot! That's one of the main things that slowed down your story about C-Money! You would reference something like to Grand Theft Auto, but it is completely unimportant to the plot and it is never mentioned again. So you just need to take EXTRA CARE with this story. What I've learned through personal experience writing a story like this is that it's VERY, VERY EASY to fuck up. And if you are writing from the viewpoint of an existing character (like you plan to do with Jimmy), and not an original one you created, then you need to have his personality and not make stuff up for him. Since Jimmy is an existing character in the Bully universe, you need to have stuff he says/does to be in character for him, you know what I mean?

I hope you do a great job, dude! :D