User blog comment:MichaelDiaz101/Bucky's Bad Breath/@comment-26358727-20150618033743/@comment-26358727-20150618035427

I can understand that - his charm certainly shouldn't set a player's standards in the real world, by any means!

I'm glad that you wrote this piece as you did. It highlights a lot of great traits in Beatrice while maintaining the story it was meant to tell. I, as well, believe Beatrice is probably among the stronger girls at Bullworth. I would say "the", but there's a lot to be said for Lola, as well.

I certainly look forward to your future stories concerning canon, though. You write it well; the characters, the sub plots, the interaction. You're true to the clique while projecting a unique light on relationships within!