User blog comment:SodaCat/Bullworth Nights: Chapter 5/@comment-26358727-20150618011519/@comment-26358727-20150618013234

Yes, indeed - and it's shown well! It's more endearing than annoying or overpowering, which makes for a pleasant read. Believe it or not, I'm actually not a romance fiction fan, but I do enjoy this piece ( :

Oh, I did read that you were interested in separating the story. I think it's an interesting idea, to start them together for the introduction and then split them off. It's different, but certainly not a bad idea. Of course, regardless of how it goes over the next couple of chapters, you know I'll be reading!