Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-5385060-20160322020755

This was really helpful with moving forward with Antonia, so I figured I'd love some thoughts and feedback on Sarah.

When I created Sarah, she was intended just to be a 'Tis The Season exclusive. A girl to date Pete, and not much more than that. Since then she has been mentioned a little bit in the Greaser arc, in the fact that she continued to date Pete off focus.

I would like to develop her further. Compared to all my other characters, her voice is the quietest, in the fact that she doesn't stand out much. I know she has a crippling shyness, and I do like that about her. Having her become more confident in her life isn't an option, because that will just take away everything she is. Honestly I feel like I've painted myself into a corner with her.

So, thoughts/feedback/constructive criticism, please? 