Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-4995321-20160902151643/@comment-4059927-20160922061355

I saw this too late.

My one issue is as to why her own father mistreats her, and is very forcible in his mistreatment of her. She seems like a great character though I find her as someone who certainly contradicts the measure of her own beliefs. Maybe that's a well attuned attribute of hers? She's apt to forgive, yet vilifies her siblings. A level of hypocrisy resides within her, however minimal it may be.

Also I have an understanding that she may be a very bitter character as well but is able to conceive a level of optimism that keeps her balanced.