Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-5385060-20151229013314

Okay, be brutal. I'm not good at making popular mean girl types, so I want complete honesty here.

I'm aware there is no back story yet. Basically, I'm torn between two possible option and my creative mind is too fried to choose one.

From what I've done so far, I want to know, if I'm portraying her in the right way. I don't want her to be one of those heart of gold types, because if she has a heart, it would be plastic. (Not literally.) I'm also afraid of making her an unbelievable mary sue, with all the special treatment she demands and gets. 