User blog comment:Cdc1998/A New Face at Bullworth: Part 5/@comment-26358727-20150709010425

Ha, I know you've got more to add to this chapter, but where you left off for now made me laugh a little. The line is delivered so casually, because everybody knows that one person just like Charlie, but at the same time it sounds so absurd. You can feel Edgar's concern (Bradi's, too, obviously, with how he treated Jimmy), but you can't feel angry toward Charlie, either.

For the mixture of emotions you're capturing here among the characters, you did a really good job of providing some balance. Nobody is portrayed as completely and needlessly antagonistic - there are reasons, and misunderstandings, that strike me as very real ( :

Can't way to see how the short films go, though. You've got some really interesting characters involved in Charlie's film already, so it'll be really cool to see how it plays out for them!