Board Thread:Bully Fanon Writing Club/@comment-2173402-20151116031622/@comment-5385060-20151116060335

The Bullworth Nights stories are great, and rely on the whole "Will they/Won't they" factor. Most often it is a good thing. To improve, I think each story could do with a sub-plot, seperate from each other. A red herring, if you will, to keep people guessing. Wondering what the big mystery is. Perhaps their closest friend is going through something of their own. Just spitballing; maybe Casey's parents are seperating and he doesn't know how to deal with it. Or Peanut's parents are thinking about moving away. Or maybe Bif's dad is threatening to send him to an all boy's school.

None of those ideas are set in stone, but you get the picture. They give a deeper feel to the story outside of the main couple, to add a little more depth to them.

Other than that, I got nothing. I love Style and Muse.