User blog comment:Cdc1998/A New Face at Bullworth: Part 5/@comment-2173402-20150717181713/@comment-4833053-20150718060617

I always have had trouble with describing the scenery. When it comes to writing out character's emotions, actions, and all, I'd say I'm alright, but when it comes to writing out the scenery it's like I'm a deer in head lights. When thinking out what type of setting some of the events should be placed I can get some good ideas, but when it actually comes down to writing it is where I struggle. I'll try to work on describing scenery better.

As for Edgar and Charlie, I do have some stuff planned for them. Although, attention will shift away from Charlie (you'll see what I mean soon) to some of the other characters. It's challenging for me at the moment, because I am having trouble for what to plan out to happen for Edgar since my mind is focused on what's going to be happening in the next part.