User blog comment:MichaelDiaz101/Bucky's Bad Breath/@comment-2173402-20150618032816/@comment-4059927-20150618033327

It pandered from my initial thought. Though one thing I hoped to establish was the flipping of the 'cliche gender-role heroic' dynamic. Where Beatrice, turned into more of a hero, whilst Bucky was in distress. In most fantasy stories I've read it's this idea that a woman can't be a hero. Desptie her wrongs in the story, Beatrice hopes to right her mistakes. Even though she's unbeknowst to them she still wishes to save Bucky from the damage committed by her.

As a character, I've always wished that Beatrice was a character that could be explored more in depth. From what we've seen, despite being marched upon by bullies, her characteristics could be considered to be very defiant. I tried to expose her defiance a little bit.

Glad you liked it. :P xD