User blog comment:TheToughGuy/BULLY: THE UNDEAD STORY--Chapter 24/@comment-5385060-20151120061633

Good strong start. I like what you did with Clayton there. His development could have gone one of two ways; he found a way to ignore the guilt and became a cold hearted killer. Two, self imploded, became an emotional wreck who is excruciating to read.

The fact that you chose neither brings out a whole new side to him. As if he is saying; "Yes, I regret killing. If I could go back and not do it, I would. Because I can't, I'm going to focus on something important. What is out there could kill me, so I have to kill before they can. But I still feel horrible about it."

Good work on that. I did like who you chose for the student council.