User blog comment:Cdc1998/A New Face at Bullworth: Part 3/@comment-4833053-20150622084804

Now I know you're all probably thinking the following: 1) Damn, this is long 2) Wow, this took a turn and focused on Charlie a lot.

1) Yeah, it is really long. Sorry. It goes along with the plot of the chapter. 2) Yeah, it really did take a big turn. I wanted to use Charlie as an example of some of the flaws the characters in this has. While he seems very easy going, it's because he bottles up his emotions and will explode if someone sets him off(if he's bottled up too much). I'm going to do this with some of the other characters(none made by other users though, so no Michael, Nicole, Bradi, or Jimmy Queen) I will, however, enhance the relationships between Edgar and these characters, such as how I portrayed Edgar's view on Charlie. After this chapter things will go back to normal, so don't expect any major switch in directions such as the one that occurred. This also means Charlie will go back to being very easygoing. I just wanted to show off how Charlie thinks when he's stressed instead of saying "his mind races all over the place."

I'd love and appreciate some feedback on this. I'd like to know what you all thought of it, and if I should change anything up to make it better, or remove some unnecessary parts.

Now if you'll excuse me, it's almost 5 in the morning where I am(if you're asking "Why in the hell are you up at 5 in the morning?" you can thank my love for writing, erratic sleep schedule, and listening to the song She Don't Use Jelly by the Flaming Lips for that. Why was I listening to the song? I really don't know, perhaps due to my tiredness)