User blog comment:SodaCat/Good Girls and Bad Guys/@comment-26358727-20150719170320

Hey, I know you were trying to feel out this character, and I think you're going in a great direction with him! I'm really curious to see how the clique itself develops and where you place their 'territory', but for the time being, I think you're handling the leader very well. And that's going to lead to a strong development of the others, I think.

I must say, I did listen to the song when I read it and, despite the warning, wow! I actually didn't even really tune in to what was being said until about half-way through, when the song was playing again, and I was surprised. I'm glad you went more for the idea, or the 'atmosphere', of the song as opposed to the content (

That aside, I'm very excited to see where you go with this new clique!